Reviews for The Spear and Crown
Althea Sirius chapter 1 . 3/23
The pov switching needs to stop. It's too confusing.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2017
Absolutely stonkingly brilliant start! Everyone is perfectly in character and you've developed the relationship between Merida and the three suitors wonderfully. I particularly like MacGuffin here, he's so precious! I onow it's been an age since you published this & likely won't update again, but I've really enjoyed reading what there is. Thank you!x
DarkFay chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
Keep going! I liked it.
FFX2player chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
This is a really well written piece, I hope you keep going...
XxShyxX chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
SegaGenesis1 chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
Nice hope to read more. :) I like how th three young lords backed meridian up.
Brickbrain the retarted seal chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Pleeaaase update! :D
Darkmaster of the arts chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
Wow. What a start! The first chapter and im already hooked! Love your writing style and the forming plot. Can't wait for the next chap, and hopefully some alone time for McGuffin and Merida :-)
deets1 chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Welp. It's 2:45 in the morning and I'm still reading this. That should be an indication that it's pretty awesome. Sooooo... I'm not asking for constant updates or anthing, but could you coninue this story? Don't fall into the endless mire of not wanting to write! Please?


Because I really like it...
and it rocks...
and it's so interesting seeing Merida and the Young MacGuffin, MacIntosh, and Dingwall...
and seeing Merida as a legit warrior for the first time would be so cool. Really cool.

I look forward to the next chapter. Seems like it'll be great.

P.S. That seems like a disjointed review. Sorry. I blame lack of sleep. ... but sorry.
P.S.S. I loved how the three young clansmen approached Merida when she was pissed and whacking the tree. I could just see a tiny heard of clansmen, coming forward and then retreating, and then coming forward... XD it was hilarious.
P.S.S.S. Something about dingwall speaking so normally seems off to me... you may need to explain that. Then again, this is one of my first brave fics so... I don''t know. Just thought I should say it though...

Thanks for the awesome story,
MidnightShadow07 chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
I'm interested to see where you're going to take this. PLEASE update soon!
Safe runner chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Oh! Why isn't there more? This is so thrilling and everyone, specially Merida, is absolutely spot on in character!
arinhel.melleide chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
This looks to be a very fun and interesting story! You write all of the characters very well, and have a good understanding of them. I can't wait to read more!
inu-rulz chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
oh... my... god... i hope you intend to continue this story, because it is amazing so far. I love the idea behind it and can't wait for more chapters!
Hiron Otsuki chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
This is a really good start. You're well-written, your pacing is great, and you've got the characters spot on. Please continue it!
Astrid Hofferman chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Hey! This was really great! Keep on keeping on! :D
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