Reviews for First
QuestionablyCapableGhoul chapter 20 . 8/23/2016
That was a strangely satisfying ending. After all, what would Erisa have done after that? Did her family watch? If they had, would they have wanted her back?
I am curious though, what would have Erisa gone on to do if she hadn't been killed?
DCLS chapter 20 . 7/17/2014
This is how I see a situation like this really ending. If someone is strong enough and manipulative enough to make it through the program, I don't see the he government letting them anywhere near normal society ever again.
Evan chapter 20 . 3/25/2014
.GOODNESS. I can't believe I'm just now reviewing this. I finished it a while ago, but I've been floating around back on here recently and gave this another read. It is so good! I don't even know where to begin. From the beginning I figured it would be an average story, honestly. It seemed structured similarly to the book, and I figured I wasn't in for much. But as it developed, you could really get a sense for all of the characters. I actually ended up liking Erisa a lot. Just a few minor complaints on my part, unique ending. It pisses me off to no end, but that's why it's great. We've seen the traditional one winner, and the whole escape thing, but this is a new take. So those are just my basic thoughts after reading this.
Great job,
Dante Alighieri1308 chapter 4 . 11/14/2013
This is way to similar to the actual story for my taste. Your writing style is nice, as is your grammar and word use, but the overall plot is shaping up to be exactly the same as the novel. I'm going to go ahead and assume that the ending is different though, with Erisa surviving and Kiyoshi giving himself up for her.

Anyways... not quite my story...
Dante Alighieri1308 chapter 2 . 11/14/2013
Very, very, very similar vibe to the movies beginning... like almost entirely the same... except for the names... yeah like literally everything was the same...

I hope that changes in the upcoming chapters.
Dante Alighieri1308 chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Oooh, I like your set up already! Despite the date issue since this would literally place things after WWII and see that as an issue, but this is an A/U world (this story and the novel) so it's ok.

Excited to read more! You've got five interesting characters so far and I can't wait to see where these five go!
ImmuneSquare chapter 5 . 9/15/2013
did not suspect that.
ImmuneSquare chapter 4 . 9/15/2013
i think she definitely has the capacity to kill, however she will probably let the people who don't want to fight go.
ImmuneSquare chapter 2 . 9/15/2013
this looks promising
Sami chapter 20 . 8/22/2013
Um…You alive? O_o

PLEASE update this month!
Sami chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
…Getting worried. :/
…I'll wait a few extra days if it's taking longer than you expected…
Sami chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Waiting for the story! :)
Can't wait!
Sami chapter 20 . 8/10/2013
I was just listening to this song for the 18th time today and I started thinking of Erisa…

watch?v0DTLcR5awn0&desktop_uri%2Fwatch%3Fv%3D0DTLc R5awn0
Sami chapter 20 . 8/2/2013
I liked Kiyoshi a lot too, now that I think of it…
Oh well.
Can't wait for the other story!
Sami chapter 20 . 7/30/2013
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