Reviews for Perfection
DemonFoxBK201 chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
Make more chapters for this! Please..?
Mystelteyn chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
It's a nicely written fic, but I just want to point out - his given name is Kazuto. Japanese write their names with their family names in front - you probably have this misconception cause the Japanese use family names for people who they're not familiar with.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
The way I say "Kirigaya" makes it seem like a last name, doesn't it? It indeed sounds like one. I don't know why I keep pondering that fact when I talk to him, but it has become a habit. But it's a first name.

But Kirigaya is his last name.
Tabtree chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Really well written; i thought it ended really abruptly thought :(... If you decide to do another SAO piece Ill definitely check it out. Keep up the good work!
Aomori Miki chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
I know nothing about SAO, but that oneshot was really good! Asuna sounds really nice and smart, and I loved how you wrote it - it truly was "Perfection!"

Aomori Miki
Ten-Faced chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Let's just ignore the fact that I know absolutely nothing about this fandom!

Even if I know nothing, it was still interesting to read.

And gray can be boring... unless it happens to be on a very sexy person. Preferably male, but I'm biased.