Reviews for Shin Megami Tensei: P3 Plus 1
GoldenScarlet chapter 17 . 7/22/2014
I like the direction this story is going, though I could've sworn that there were supposed to be paragraph breaks when different people are speaking. I'm cool with Yu x Rise... in the other timeline. Truth be told, I just prefer Yu x Hamuko to any other Persona paring ever, so I'm glad you're going in that direction. I think. I hope. I want. Badly.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/31/2014
Why would narukami have to sign the contract? His affinity is with the world not death/the universe arcana.
Sinister Yandere chapter 28 . 10/25/2013
Non-story chapter are grounds for reporting. As such, many will recognize it as such and report this story, which hopefully, will result tp its complete removal from the entire fanfiction system archive.
Reported. But you can fix it by makingit an author's note to your last chapter, something even a moron could do.
Next time, read the rules.
kitanalao chapter 15 . 9/22/2013
waw... cool battle scene... impresive...
kitanalao chapter 14 . 9/22/2013
i see... you changed a few social link... good environment in this chapter... by the way i am sorry it took 3 months since my review in chapter 10. but now i am back right?
kitanalao chapter 13 . 9/22/2013
hmm... you must be do that in your own game right? well... nice creativity i guess... nice idea in this chapter...
kitanalao chapter 12 . 9/22/2013
hmm... good chapter... eventhough. you only copy the conversation from the game...lack of creativity... i guess
kitanalao chapter 11 . 9/22/2013
hmm... okay that was a nice chapter...i guess
kitanalao chapter 10 . 7/1/2013
not so much change i see but it was fit i guess... nice progress but unfortunatelly i had to stop reading and review due to my other activity but i'll be back when i had a time.
kitanalao chapter 9 . 7/1/2013
this chapter has nice inveronment. however. i've got a little confuse for minato to just accept ikutsuki offer because he must be know ikutsuki have other plan for s.e.e.s. why he didn't try to prevent ikutsuki evil plan. i am sure he was already aware of it.
kitanalao chapter 8 . 7/1/2013
hmm. . you change the persona of minato and the female character. nice change. by the way what is real name of female character for this story. haruko, or hamuko? please fix it so i will not get confuse again in the future...
kitanalao chapter 7 . 7/1/2013
intriguing change. i like this story already...
kitanalao chapter 6 . 7/1/2013
interesting change. i like to see how this turn out to be...
A Jack Frost Guy chapter 27 . 6/30/2013
This old reviewer who went on that weird tangent here. Good to see that those Personae weren't actually destroyed. Wonder what's with the power surge though...

P.S. Sorry to hear about the diabetes...
HellPwnage1337 chapter 27 . 6/30/2013
A good story. Also, shouldn't Kazuya's persona be Abel instead of Beldr, but he can use the other Bels too.?
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