Reviews for Suicide |
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![]() ![]() Your story is crap. Not worth anyone adopting it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() sorta need lots more xD like loooots more :D |
![]() ![]() Keep writing |
![]() ![]() she sounds like such a jackass rose died I am marie LOL ya sure you are you stupid little whore |
![]() ![]() ![]() help! save her rose! noo! :( love the story, keep writing :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter... but Lissa seems like she doesn't care about Rose to me... like she just turns and walks away at big moments while Rose thinks of her as a sister... well update soon! |
![]() ![]() Sad you have so little reviews but keep writing. |
![]() ![]() this is actually how i wished it i wished rose got depressed i couldn't understand how she could be so strong and independent i wanted to see rose weak i know this sounds evil of me but maybe this has more to do with me personally than rose but when its her POV i want to be in her shoes and im not strong like her character but i didn't expect suicide i expected cutting like lissa but this is good cause i understand Lol x |
![]() ![]() u should continue instead of having people adopt it because i luv the plot and i feel someone will take it over and just compleatly ruin it and it will suck...and again i luv ur writing so please continue becaause it is great |
![]() ![]() ![]() The review that is writen before is mine, my mail is , if u think im able to adopt the story mail me please I ' ve got plenty of ideas for the story |
![]() ![]() Hey id like to adopt your story, but also i would like that if i do it i could send you every chapter before i post it so that u correct it and that it doesnt change too much the course of the story P.s: im chilean, english is my second language and i think it would be better that if i adopt the story u correct it first |
![]() ![]() ![]() XO i REALLY think rose should have accepted... but i really want to see what she does now . UPDATE SOON PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() it was great cant wat for the next chap |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it! i kinda want a new guy for the new Marie . well LOVE the story! hope you can update soon! |
![]() ![]() Wow Rose is so different. I hope things gets better and i can't wait to read the action packed next chapter |