|Reviews for Pharyss|
| Srbcarson chapter 81 . 8/6/2018
I just finished this story and I really enjoyed it! It was fun to go through this adventure with Ebony. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us! :)
| Ookamifemale001 chapter 1 . 3/1/2018
This story is amazing. Please, please, please! Tell me you are getting this published.
| DramaticBook0000 chapter 81 . 8/6/2017
Hey! I absolutely loved this story! It's honestly amazing and I want you to publish it so I can buy it!
A few chapters to the end, I thought that Kol had died and so I kinda wished that she had married Christian...not affectionately but (making it clear to him too) so that she could have his money. And that she would use his money to take over Kols job in the lower part of towns. I thought that would be very poetic... but your ending was beautiful.
One critique I did have was on your handling of Christian's character. I loved what you did with his character, but I almost wish that you hadn't forgotten about nearer to the climax of your story. I felt like you kinda neglected, accidentally.
All that said, this is a beautiful story and I really hope that you publish it. And if you do, let me know so that I can buy it!
| Guest chapter 62 . 5/1/2017
*squeal!* all wet and embracing
| Guest chapter 49 . 5/1/2017
Ooooo! But I still ship her with Kol.
And is Bert a lesbian? Spending too much time with Addison indeed...
| Rahera22 chapter 81 . 2/21/2017
I love this story. Its so great. I do think it would be great to find out what happened to Giselle though...
| Conjectured chapter 81 . 9/14/2016
This was absolutely beautiful! I'm literally wiping tears from my eyes right now. And of course, what girl wouldn't choose the bad boy with the heart of gold and true love over some simpering prince!
Love, love this!
| Guest chapter 81 . 1/10/2016
Such a good story. I totally called it about Christian! Not entirely sure what happened to Giselle tbh. Ah well. And finally...I'm so in love with Kol! I always knew he was the one 3
| Guest chapter 81 . 12/28/2015
Love both your story's! They're really good!
| IsileeTandem chapter 81 . 7/15/2015
What about Mr and Mrs evil?
| RandomObsessionsOfMine chapter 49 . 7/10/2015
Why does Christian progressively get more annoying as KOL progressively gets more awesome?
| RandomObsessionsOfMine chapter 44 . 7/10/2015
NO HOW COULD SHE ABANDON KOL?
| winterprincess chapter 81 . 1/13/2015
Hi! Have you ever thought about publishing?
I started this story last October and have been reading the story when ever I had time. Over breaks I would grab my tablet and curl up in bed reading each chapter. This story took hold of me and consumed my thoughts so much so that I created the term "Stuck in Phayrss", because I thought about it long after I finished a reading a chapter or two. The idea of the Pharyss celebration is what peaked my interest at first. Ebony's voice was a great narration at explaining Pharyss and the things in it. Ebony was very relatable, but not that "Oh I am tomboy" manner. Each and very character you introduced felt real and well rounded. Even the minor characters felt like actual people. The characterization and world building were two of my main favorite things about this story.
Now, from the start I was partial to Kol. I liked Christain just fine; thought he was charming and kind... that is until Kol was introduced. I loved his mischeviousness and want for adventure! Christain paled in comparision. The only issue was that Ebony only had eyes for Christain and Kol never showed any signs of having feelings for her. I thought they could be nothing more than friends (though secretly I wished that was not the case). Christains behavior also became odd and confusing. I didn't know what to think of him and Kol and Ebony were still friends. Needless to say, your foreshadowing of Christain's true character had always shown, but it was subtle enough to doubt whether he was kind or a complete jerk. Kol's history was very interesting and only made me like him more. Some of my chapters were the ones after Ebony escaped Garen. I honestly thought I could never like Victoria or Giselle. But Victoria's character change was done beautifully! I am so glad that she and Ebony will have a chance to build a better relationship. Giselle on the otherhand... I hope she sufferes for all of the chaos and agony she caused. There were so many side characters I loved too! Like Dewey (Paislee and him are perfect for each other), his mother, Pandia, Curtis and Clover and many many more. Each adds to the charm of Pharyss.
I absolutly adored the small details that you included. Such as the reoccuring older couple, the storm from the picnic and when Ebony learned the truth about Kol, the food at the banquet in chapter 70, and etc. They enhanced the story so much and is another reason as to why it is so special.
The ending was done spectacularly! I was on pins and needles until Kol finally showed up. Although a good ending always leaves the reader with questions. I wanted to see Mekt through Ebony's eyes, meet Kol's sister, laugh some more at Curtis and Clover's antics, and much much much more! I feel as though the world of Pharyss is real and I am so sad to be leaving. You did a wonderful job of bringing your ideas to life. You are an awesome writer! This is by far my favorite "fanfiction" ever! I wish I could keep it on my book shelf.
| RandomFTfan0204 chapter 50 . 1/8/2015
AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO WANTS KOL WITH EBONY?! Because I think they would look so cute together! X3
| So Sorry From The Sea chapter 42 . 12/30/2014
I can't tell if I am on Team Kol or Team Christian.