|Reviews for Pharyss|
| Dark Dragon Rider Night Elf chapter 81 . 1/10
This is an AMAZING story and a great fresh retelling of a classic tale. Well Done!
| Mystic.Luna1997 chapter 81 . 12/31/2013
Firstly i'd like to congratulate you such an outstanding story, seriously though you have talent because that story is publish-worthy, not to mention off the hook. Mani was holding on to my seat at all the expertly placed turns in the plot. All in all I love this story and I am also really happy you got to finish it because I was reading it when it only had about 18 chapters. Keep up the great work , if you're planning to make a career in creative writing you would denifinitely make it! :D
| Gigigue chapter 81 . 12/28/2013
Oh man, I feel like crying right now! (Partially 'cause I should be sleeping, but that's beside the point.) This was the most perfect ending possible. So happy! But of course, now it's time to leave all the characters, which is the problem with stand-alone novels. :P Thank you so much for writing this. This is literally one of if not the best story I've errand on FanFiction ever. And, with some edits and refinement, this could be published. So so good. I will be sure to read your next story starting tomorrow. Thanks again for giving me this awesome adventure to experience! (And sorry for completely taking over your first page of reviews... I get a little overzealous sometimes.)
| Gigigue chapter 78 . 12/28/2013
Best. Chapter. Ever. Kol figured it out! They can be together! And now they're both injured, possibly dead. The irony of it all. I really hope Andrew gets to know the real Kol soon, because he really is a wonderful guy. Ebb loves them both so much, and it'd be horrible if they didn't get along...
| Gigigue chapter 75 . 12/28/2013
Yes! Finally the mockery comes into play... I love that Kol actually gets it. Every time he could have been deceived by something (spell, mockery), he sees right through it. He's officially the smartest character ever. He still hasn't found out about Andrew though, and I'm dying for him to figure it out. And I can't believe this crazy ride is almost over. Only two more reviews from me!
| Gigigue chapter 70 . 12/28/2013
Oh my. So much to talk about. Thank you Kol for breaking the engagement with Paislee! They'll both be so much happier, especially since now Paislee can hook up with Dewey. :) I completely support that couple. And ooh, the tension really racked up when Andrew came into play! So much jealousy on Kol's part. I can't wait to see his face when he finds out the truth. Despite all this, I kind of hoped that Addie and Bert were simply best friends and not a couple. I don't like reading that kind of stuff.
| Gigigue chapter 65 . 12/28/2013
First, just wanted to say sorry for not reading in a while! School really kept me busy, so... Anyway. The spell on Ebony makes me so mad! She acts like an extreme Mary-Sue! I can imagine how boring it must be to write her that way. And Kol is amazing for realizing that she must have been poisoned. Can't wait to see how the spell is broken!
| FairyTailFiction chapter 81 . 12/11/2013
I have been on a huge Disney kick lately, and I wanted to read a fairy tale fan fiction. I happened upon this particular fan fiction, and I couldn't put it down! It got to the point where I wasn't paying attention in class at all, and I was constantly wondering what would happen next.
There are a few grammar issues here and there, but not enough, or glaringly obvious, as to deter a person from reading this particular book.
I will be rereading it many times. I even began to reread it after I had finally read the last sentence.
Good job! It's not easy to find a good fan fiction to read. This one is so different, but with the same underlying plot. I can't wait to read more!
| Gigigue chapter 60 . 12/4/2013
I knew Giselle would ruin Ebb's dress at some point! I just knew it! And man, Kol's story is so amazing. He's like the guardian of the lower city. Does he really want to marry someone (aka. Paislee) who can't even know about this other life of his? That doesn't seem very smart. Even if she did know, she probably wouldn't want to have anything to do with that aspect of his personality. That doesn't make for a very good partner for him to spend his life with. Come on Kol! Choose Ebony!
| Gigigue chapter 55 . 12/3/2013
Giselle is a horrible person. Oh my gosh, she just has no empathy whatsoever! And Christian? He's just as bad. He's too willing to believe anything he hears. Kol on the other hand is a smart person who is kind and caring. And yet he can't seem to get past the fact that he can still marry for love despite his father's wishes. He doesn't need his father's fortune - he can make his own way in the world. It seems much more his style anyway. And actually, I'm starting to get annoyed with Ebb a little. She seems so stuck on getting the prince that she is willing to overlook every mean thing he does, and ignores the perfectly wonderful man in front of her. Ugh, I need to know what she does! Oh, and I noticed that sometimes you use a really great word, but then reuse it in the next sentence, which then kind of makes the word seem boring. So be careful about that.
| Gigigue chapter 50 . 12/2/2013
Ooh, the glass slippers sound gorgeous! I totally want some of those. Though I've always thought that glass slippers might not be that pretty in real life because you'd be seeing the persons feet all the time. But yours sound awesome. I can't wait until Ebony wears them at the ball! I wonder what Kol will think?
| Gigigue chapter 45 . 12/2/2013
I love your creative ideas for the balls. I'm dying to know what the other three are! But I wish Ebony could be going as Kol's partner instead. I'm starting to get the impression that Christian is a bit of a player. Whereas Kol, although wilder, more dangerous, and a little reckless, is at least loyal. I love your descriptions of the zoo! I would love to go see all those animals - I would spend all day just wandering around...
| Gigigue chapter 40 . 12/1/2013
I'm glad that Ebony has decided to meet Kol, or at least see if he's there. I kind of think I would do that, with nothing else to see. I also really hope Victoria is getting nicer, because I only want her to end up with Prince Hector if she truly changes. I can't wait to get to the exciting part!
| Gigigue chapter 35 . 12/1/2013
Whoa whoa whoa. Kol is the leader of the largest gang in the lower city?! Wow. Well that added a heck of a lot of tension. Still, I think I like him a little more for that. Not that I think what he's doing is good, but hey, it makes him more interesting as a character so... That and Christian acted like a jerk at the picnic, so he has been lowered in my esteem, which raises Kol up all the more. And what's the connection between him and Niko? Are they the same person? Or brothers?
| Gigigue chapter 30 . 12/1/2013
Ooh, I absolutely adore Pandia. First of all, I'm a cat lover, which means I think tigers are pretty cool, and she's a white tiger (and white's my favorite color), which makes her even cooler. Plus, she can shoot a bow and arrow, and her personality is very cat-like, which fascinates me. Great job on creating her character! I hope Ebony's meeting with Christian works out, because with Giselle following him, it can't end well.