|Reviews for Blue birds Was it meant to be? Or Fate?|
| SpawnedMacabre chapter 2 . 3/23/2015
It's good but practice more...
| Mark Louie chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
| Marina Ka-Fai chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
That was really cute!
| chrishane chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
| Gay-critical-passion chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Well it can be difficult to have a story move through dialogue and it was done poorly, it was a bit too fast and I wasn't sure what was going on. It would be better if you'd added description throughout the story, it would move the story along quite nicely. Though this is a personal pet peeve of mine but this story would do fine without the Japanese, just because the game is from Japan doesn't mean that the game characters are Japanese.