Reviews for It doesn't work like that
Guest chapter 8 . 8/13/2016
fricka chapter 4 . 1/8/2016
coolexaj chapter 1 . 7/6/2015
No Eckhart :(
FFWrite chapter 4 . 6/30/2014
One thing DS already has a name it is valfor...
Kaizelle-kyliegurl13 chapter 10 . 5/4/2014
I was lol-ing all the way. It's so funny that n.o words begin to cover it! The start when Mihile 'proposes' to Eckhart caught my attention and when I read on... Gawd, ROTF
Pekiunai chapter 10 . 12/28/2013
Me: Oh my god that was hilarious! I loved every chapter *is still laughing*
Caira: What was that?!
Luka: More like what were you reading?
Aidan: And how did you find this story anyway? I need to add it to my faves now!
Me: Maybe you should've left out that rape and sex part though...
Luka: ... Sis I'm taking the computer from you now.
Caira: ... I still don't know how I found that story...
Vi chapter 7 . 2/20/2013
Ha ha you should make more stories like this but you know, continued from this one
Vi chapter 7 . 2/11/2013
Nice you should make more of this kind of story but to bad you already made a finale
JusKIdding chapter 9 . 11/11/2012
I'm not really sure to laugh or not to some parts I do laugh at others I don't.
Guest chapter 8 . 10/5/2012
Aran's a female. Go look at the luminous tutorial.
Mercedes chapter 8 . 9/17/2012
Okay. That was weird
StupidityNowOffersWisdom chapter 2 . 8/29/2012
'Phantom's Brothel' My reaction: "what." Before cracking up.

I like this. Keep it up /insert tilde

AceStarKnight chapter 8 . 8/25/2012
Wow...never heard that song before...

Still good stuff.

And I know you posted saying you dont ship...but you got to! Mercedes x Aran is rare! So rare, like it's the last one of its species rare!
AceStarKnight chapter 7 . 8/25/2012
Woah...didn't know Luminous' internal struggle was that hard...

And Mercedes is Aran's girlfriend?! You have got to show a chapter of those two together! You know how rare Mercedes X Aran is?

You got to!

Still, Luminous technically got what he deserve, and never play cards with Phantom...
Vib chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Well, i think it was pretty funny and unexpected. Like it!(: continue the good job!
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