|Reviews for It doesn't work like that|
| coolexaj chapter 1 . 7/6
No Eckhart :(
| FFWrite chapter 4 . 6/30/2014
One thing DS already has a name it is valfor...
| Kaizelle-kyliegurl13 chapter 10 . 5/4/2014
I was lol-ing all the way. It's so funny that n.o words begin to cover it! The start when Mihile 'proposes' to Eckhart caught my attention and when I read on... Gawd, ROTF
| Pekiunai chapter 10 . 12/28/2013
Me: Oh my god that was hilarious! I loved every chapter *is still laughing*
Caira: What was that?!
Luka: More like what were you reading?
Aidan: And how did you find this story anyway? I need to add it to my faves now!
Me: Maybe you should've left out that rape and sex part though...
Luka: ... Sis I'm taking the computer from you now.
Caira: ... I still don't know how I found that story...
| Vi chapter 7 . 2/20/2013
Ha ha you should make more stories like this but you know, continued from this one
| Vi chapter 7 . 2/11/2013
Nice you should make more of this kind of story but to bad you already made a finale
| JusKIdding chapter 9 . 11/11/2012
I'm not really sure to laugh or not to laugh...at some parts I do laugh at others I don't.
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/5/2012
Aran's a female. Go look at the luminous tutorial.
| Mercedes chapter 8 . 9/17/2012
Okay. That was weird
| StupidityNowOffersWisdom chapter 2 . 8/29/2012
'Phantom's Brothel' My reaction: "what." Before cracking up.
I like this. Keep it up /insert tilde
| AceStarKnight chapter 8 . 8/25/2012
Wow...never heard that song before...
Still good stuff.
And I know you posted saying you dont ship...but you got to! Mercedes x Aran is rare! So rare, like it's the last one of its species rare!
| AceStarKnight chapter 7 . 8/25/2012
Woah...didn't know Luminous' internal struggle was that hard...
And Mercedes is Aran's girlfriend?! You have got to show a chapter of those two together! You know how rare Mercedes X Aran is?
You got to!
Still, Luminous technically got what he deserve, and never play cards with Phantom...
| Vib chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Well, i think it was pretty funny and unexpected. Like it!(: continue the good job!
| Mercedes chapter 7 . 8/23/2012
I've never seen a Mercedes x Luminous before... I like it!
| AceStarKnight chapter 4 . 8/16/2012
Damn...Vladimir raped Oz...what a twist! Lol!
BTW, I hate those kinds of stories too!