Reviews for Drawn Into Your Flame
kaayrakoi chapter 23 . 4/5/2016
It has been almost four years, I hope one day u finish this amazing story. It has such potential and is already phenomenal.
korra light chapter 23 . 10/21/2015
I wish you would update. It's one great story.
ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
Wonderful!
Update immediately, please!
Hapsgurl80 chapter 23 . 8/2/2013
:) love this story please update soon
MugglebornPrincesa chapter 23 . 4/17/2013
yeah, you totally forgot about the story LOLOLOLOL
GlassxXxHeart chapter 23 . 2/15/2013
Up. Date. NOW.
K-Bird Lily 2 chapter 23 . 12/8/2012
will you be updating soon?
Cyanide Laced chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
I love this story so much! I was really disappointed when I got to the last chapter and it was just a note from awhile ago. :[ please continue soon! Its fantastic! Much love!
Wolf-in-the-Wings chapter 22 . 11/16/2012
One of the best Bane/OC stories I have seen thus far. One-because you write very well, two-because you have an interesting female character (strong yet playful with baggage of her own and a willingness to stand on the wrong side of the lines) and three because you have more of a realistic dynamic between her and Bane. I like the back and forth between the two. Bane is still very much the powerful dominant figure that he would be and Danika adds to that fact and complicates it at the same time (especially after what the two of them did in the last chapter) That's one of the reasons I liked how this last bit played out...that conflicting comfort factor ( Bane closing up after having allowed intimacy and Danica searching for more only to be pushed back down) is believable. Just because Bane holds a certain fondness for Danica doesn't mean he won't be cold/threatening and that makes the times he does show affection all the more interesting. This kind of tension makes room for the best kind of banter/fights/and makeups ;) I liked how Danica calmly called Bane out near the end- "I know you feel something for me Bane, you will not allow yourself to admit it because you are afraid that it might cause a weakness in you, and that Sir makes you weak."
You do really well with detail and atmosphere-very fluid and easy to picture. Hope you can add even more fire to the flame ;) Look forward to seeing what else you come up with Keep writing.
Guest chapter 23 . 10/3/2012
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Esaint chapter 23 . 10/4/2012
I must say this story is the BEST Bane story I've read so far! When she killed her rapist Bane did seem a tad out of character when he took off his mask for her and all, but everything else is written so awesomely that it doesn't even matter. I love your original character, I love the fire she possess, I love how she never loses her fire - only momentarily, hardly that - I love her red hair & the fact that you made her attractive - sounds superficial but oh well - and I love her and Bane's connection. Usually authors write about how he attracts himself to an innocent type of girl, but here you made him find a girl who will give him a challenge, someone he even compared to himself! I love how he saw himself in Dani in the beginning, which plays a part in why he kept her. Well done, and very well written! Please update more, this story is the first Bane story I've favorite & follow, for good reason too. :)
ThePhantomismyLove chapter 23 . 10/3/2012
Plse write more. i love the story. i like that this oc is an actual fighter. the othersdo to but this is different
goldspleen chapter 23 . 10/3/2012
I'm so happy you plan to continue this lovely, lovely story. Can't wait for the next chapter :D
shalmarrose chapter 22 . 9/18/2012
cant wait for the next one,,, good story so far i must admit...
Guest chapter 22 . 9/2/2012
Another great chapter!
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