Lovely, utterly fantastic! I loved every second of it!
Keep up the amazing work!
L

This is EPIC! Oh my I’m so excited! Can’t wait to read the third instillation! ONWARDS!

decent sequel, but it's weird where you end it

Hi, is this a sequel? If it is, you might want to mention it in the summery or a AN. Wonderfully done btw.

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I love the bit with Lestrade's spawn Lisa. "Princess of vauge teenage angst and agitation" it makes me giggle every time I read it.

Ah, interesting! Very well-written! I look forward to more chapters!

Just letting you know you are awesome!

I love the second story in this series even more than the first. You've done a great job expanding the characters and changing events. The juggling act you do between Moriarty, Grendel, "W" (aka John and Tim), and the Holmes Brother is very well balanced. I especially like how Mycroft and Sherlock are working under a false assumption about John and his origins and have no apparent knowledge of Grendel. It makes me wonder how and when they're going to figure it out in the next story as well as their reactions, particularly to W.

Does it make me a bad person if I kind of hope the John stays as a kid and lives with Sherlock? I honestly can't decide how I want the story to end.

Can't wait to read the next story, though I'll probably end up staying up too late again.

This is the most epic and majestic thing. I have no words. Thank you so much for the story.

Just want you to know its like the fourth time I've read through this and its still just as good as the first time. K bye!

Man, reading this story the song "You'll Be In My Heart" by Phil Collins comes to mind. You might recognized it since its a Walt Disney song, but the lyrics for eerily perfect here. Just look up the lyrics and you'll understand why I say that. Still I love this trilogy and that fact that one of my favorite song fit the story makes it more perfect in my opinion. Keep on writing since it is obvious that you have a gift and hopefully you can keep that passion that goes with it.

I have a theory. Perhaps the reason why the people shot by the ray go mad is because while their brains are that of an adult's, they are in younger bodies, with impulses and urges that the older set didn't have. The struggle between the younger desires and the older strain to do differently causes an almost animalistic strain and it eventually becomes too much for them and causes them to go insane.
Just a theory.

continue! continue! continue!

This story was also brilliant! I especially liked the "remake" of "the great game" with Moriarty being interested in John. And the idea o Sherlock dumping John in a boarding school has potential! Brilliant!