Reviews for Fire
TeamComrade11 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Great start! :)
multibodoke chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
really nice! please keep writting..
TheWolf32 chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
This is very good plzz make another one !
Cypress16 chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Hey,

So far, well done. I like the story line. You've created a unique scenario to get new people to the caves.

My only hope is that you keep some level of reasonabilty and uniqueness in the story.

I'm looking forward to how you get them into the caves.

As I say in any review, it's your story and your scenarios, that's what writing fan fiction is all about.

John