Reviews for The Clock Tower
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Purestrongpoem chapter 9 . 5/28/2013
Great story so far.
Blaubeermuffin chapter 9 . 4/27/2013
This... is brilliant. Ive read all that at once. And Im too lazy to review each chapter. -" But I knew from the beginning that Braginskaya is evil. - I liked that. She always is the sweet, kind, angel. But the role of the evil satanist suited her. Im almost sorry that she died. - Aaand... I kinda liked the part where Toris went insane and just killed all the children. Im a sick little person... - And I better sont even start about poor little Ivan. T.T
I dont even like the RusLiet pairing that much, but this story is just great.
And your authors notes are wonderful. I love them.
Yeah. Ehem. *scratches neck awkwardly* Thats it. I guess.
Faltering Incarnation chapter 8 . 1/5/2013
I really enjoyed reading much of your story. I love the psychological and physical abuse Toris endures and the way he reacts to Ivan's behavior. I love the punishments and the bath scene, the way Toris deals with Ivan, and even the way Ivan cares about the wounds he inflicts on Toris. It was written very skillfully and I spent much of my evening reading your story from start to finish. The darkness kept me hooked and I wanted to know what was going to happen next. I cared about Toris and Ivan and the twisted world you detailed in your story. The horror was explicit and the dynamics of their twisted relationship kept me fascinated. The only thing I disliked in the entire story was rapist Toris. That type of insanity doesn't suit him much and I sorta wish he never did such a thing. Other than that, it was a guilty pleasure to read.

Will you be continuing this or this the last chappy? Seriously, I'd love reading more.
AnniKris chapter 8 . 1/4/2013
That makes more sense now that you explained that my mistress doesn't feel like editing, because I found a few error but they are minor errors. Over all away from the errors, I really like this chapter. Yes, I'm too lazy to complement you more on this chapter as I would but I am tired and lazy. Anni
Guest chapter 7 . 1/3/2013
Ah this is so good! When are you going to post the next chapter? Anyway great story love it ... Post? :)
not logged in chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
((Avalon Roselin here))
This story has actually gotten me interested in the Clock Tower games, and apparently there was one released in the US for the PS2. :)
witch0fd00m chapter 5 . 10/18/2012
Read this on the school computer... Had to bite my hand at one point so I wouldn't make a noise.

It's sooo good!
AnniKris chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
Yaaayy! Happy please face! Fun chapter. But I let a few tears fall when it was Neeky's death because she's my sister, when I read a story with me putting my sister in that kind of situation it's just that she has been my person that I have always looked upto to learn from her mistakes. But none the less I like the chapter.
hes dead jim like this account chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
I have the urge to laugh at this whole chapter and I don't even know why.
Aw, I feel special. . . For two reasons. . .
1. Toris kissed my hand
2. I don't die immediately!
No, you didn't piss me off. I feel special and confused. But not upset.
Anyhow, wonderful chapter. I'm gonna sleep now. Night.
Vanya Heart chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
You didn't tell me you were gonna end it so soon. I thought...THAT THING was going to happen at the end of the chapter.
I don't know why but I feel like hugging Ivan in this one.
Do I start the next one, zen?
Neeky-chan chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
...That was extremely creepy. I took my class time to read that and I don't know what to say. ._. I feel sorry for Kaia right now. She's probably so mad right now. I laugh at you. Well... I can message you soon. I hope you have a great day. (And that stalker will leave you alone.)
hes dead jim like this account chapter 5 . 9/21/2012
. . . . I get mad. . . . . . Huh. . . . I wasn't aware of that
Oh! Does this mean I die in the next chapter!? Oh, god, I wanna read it!
Ahaha Your description made me laugh. Yep. I'm short. But you don't have to make it sound like I'm three feet tall! Either way, I still love it! It made me laugh. . . Hahaha
Good job you guys
Neeky-chan chapter 5 . 9/21/2012
May I ask what possessed you to get the idea if killing me. And you couldn't pass up the chance to make fun of our height. Of course. But I think it's pretty good. :3 I'm almost scared to see how you described my death. I (kinda) look forward to your next chapter. I hope you have a great day. :3
Vanya Heart chapter 5 . 9/21/2012
This chapter is so awkward.
Although, strangely, I didn't giggle until the end, when I thought about it overall and as a whole...
But seriously, it's like:
Wake up in da mornin' betch
Took a showah and saw Ivan's d*ck
Said he was fugly and lost muh eye
Beat the fudge out of him wif my demin
Now iz sad cuz I'm not a masochist
Ivan is a sexy as$ uke
Vanya has major problems
Fak this imma kill some children

See? That's my evaluation of our story.

I dun feel good.

I stayed home from school.

I have chronic abdominal pains of an unknown cause and have had it since 3rd grade.'s the garlics fault.

You vill take care of me.

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