Reviews for Secret lovers
TracesOfFreedom chapter 8 . 1/24
I like your plot but not the way you deliver it...
You make exciting scene sounds flat... the battle scene souldnt sound like discussing the weather...
you have a nice plot, use more words to express that
Even if you want to make it short, choose sentences that makes it still sound exciting

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Thats it for now...
Thanks for reading my rambling... keep writing :)
Riddle-Snape chapter 11 . 1/20
well I hope then we will see update soon ;)
ibterismith50 chapter 11 . 1/20
That's great that things are working out for you. But take care of yourself first please.
ArchangelAmvs chapter 10 . 10/8/2015
Are you still planning on continuing this story it's really good?
mimico909 chapter 10 . 3/4/2015
Please update this story soon! It's been almost 2 years how much longer do you want mt to suffer while waiting for more chapters!?
Kaya70 chapter 10 . 8/10/2014
Love it plz update soon
I heart vamps chapter 10 . 7/18/2014
Please update soon .
Anaelyssa chapter 3 . 3/13/2014
OH dear god. I can't stand this anymore. Please wash my eyes out. Get a beta or something; this is unreadable.
horsesrules chapter 10 . 3/12/2014
Write more it's good
DarkenedRose24 chapter 10 . 10/26/2013
More please
Ginga chapter 10 . 8/24/2013
Update. Soon.
tazztazz chapter 10 . 8/12/2013
cant wait for more chapters as this story seems to get better and better as the story went on.
Yume chapter 10 . 8/6/2013
Please, update soon
Diana chapter 10 . 7/10/2013
Please, update soon!
Ginga chapter 10 . 7/7/2013
Please, update as soon as you can...
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