|Reviews for Secret lovers|
| TracesOfFreedom chapter 8 . 1/24
I like your plot but not the way you deliver it...
You make exciting scene sounds flat... the battle scene souldnt sound like discussing the weather...
you have a nice plot, use more words to express that
Even if you want to make it short, choose sentences that makes it still sound exciting
Thats it for now...
Thanks for reading my rambling... keep writing :)
| Riddle-Snape chapter 11 . 1/20
well I hope then we will see update soon ;)
| ibterismith50 chapter 11 . 1/20
That's great that things are working out for you. But take care of yourself first please.
| ArchangelAmvs chapter 10 . 10/8/2015
Are you still planning on continuing this story it's really good?
| mimico909 chapter 10 . 3/4/2015
Please update this story soon! It's been almost 2 years how much longer do you want mt to suffer while waiting for more chapters!?
| Kaya70 chapter 10 . 8/10/2014
Love it plz update soon
| I heart vamps chapter 10 . 7/18/2014
Please update soon .
| Anaelyssa chapter 3 . 3/13/2014
OH dear god. I can't stand this anymore. Please wash my eyes out. Get a beta or something; this is unreadable.
| horsesrules chapter 10 . 3/12/2014
Write more it's good
| DarkenedRose24 chapter 10 . 10/26/2013
| Ginga chapter 10 . 8/24/2013
| tazztazz chapter 10 . 8/12/2013
cant wait for more chapters as this story seems to get better and better as the story went on.
| Yume chapter 10 . 8/6/2013
Please, update soon
| Diana chapter 10 . 7/10/2013
Please, update soon!
| Ginga chapter 10 . 7/7/2013
Please, update as soon as you can...