I liked this ch! It wasn’t too slow for me

Love the Tudor theme of D and H’s costumes! Nice job weaving history into the Malfoys’ back story!
Loved the dancing!

Oooh, nice ch!

My first thought while reading this story is English may not be your first language, so if that is the case ignore the rest.

If not, then heres some things I'm reviewing.

you seem to have a habit of not re reading your story as you progress further into it. Repeating lines and forgetting things that have already happened. It gets quite confusing fairly quickly.

spell & grammar check as well as find one or two people to beta read your story BEFORE you publish them online.

you should make a note in the beginning that the Hermione in this story is VERY OC (original character) as you've changed just about everything about her.
For example, a Hermione whose a heiress would still be humble and dorky, but you made her very snobbish, outspoken and materialistic.

do more research when writing about traditional things like arranged marriages and inheritances. A lot of what you have in here doesnt make quite enough sense for me to follow fluidly.

I actually am going to have to stop reading. I'm so annoyed with the OOC Hermione not shoving that ring right back in Richard's face. And now it's because he parents want their money? ans she's fine with it?! No way.

“ Severus “
Not Snape or Professor Snape
But as a snamione shipper to I just got chills

Never read a fic that shows exactly what it may have been like following the end of the battle. Great first chapter.

AHHHHHHH SHE WAS READING GAME OF THRONESSSS AAHHHHHHHHH MY RESPECT FOR THE PAIR OF THEM HAS INCREASED 100-FOLD!

great story really loved it

Can we appreciate how thoroughly she described Draco when trying to establish her point? Love it! :D

Can we appreciate how thoroughly she described Draco when trying to establish her point? Love it! :D

This is so good! I love the muggle life that you've created for Hermione. It's really interesting to make Hermione high-society rich and draw parallels to Draco's upbringing as a pureblood. Even though I feel like Hermione is ooc at times, I still like this version of her. I liked your version of Draco and the rest of the characters as well. Overall, this was very fun to read!

I absolutely adore this story! I can't wait to get started on Enlivened.

Blaise using the word “retards” in this chapter to reference his teammates... not the best choice of words. A bit insensitive. Surely there are other words you could use in place of this onemorons, half-wits, something like that?

Amazing start!