Reviews for Feelings are complicated
Guest chapter 2 . 8/6/2013
All I can see: a mega huge wall of text. Oh dear god, split it up.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/1/2013
Good story but I think you should write longer more detailed stories. Overall 9/10
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
I love ot
Tiger-girl-14 chapter 3 . 12/16/2012
I thought it was against the law to marry a family member!

tigerleah-out
Anthony1l chapter 3 . 10/13/2012
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
bennet001 chapter 3 . 8/25/2012
Uh what I thought that you would make it longer and in all honesty it seemed a bit rushed like you just wanted this over and done with. Oh well it was nice good job. Chow Bennet out!
The Cretin chapter 2 . 8/5/2012
WHOA MAN! Strained but I got it read :) This was nice. Fluffy but nice. I'd stick to spacing the paragraphs out. Easier for people to read ;) Hope you are well. Hope to read more soon. Keep rockin
bennet001 chapter 2 . 8/4/2012
Hahahaha, classic love story lover falls into coma and the "power of love" wakes him up really good story with some minor grammar error also if I have to say you rushed some parts of it you should flesh out more in this chapter but all in all great story. Hope to see more. Chow Bennet out
bennet001 chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Good very good, I can relate to how you have the opportunity to help someone but your efforts weren't enough so sad for Gwen.
The Cretin chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Swings in...through a shut window...on a greased rope...HEEEEEEEY YAAAAAAH!...goes flying out another window...left this note behind:

Nice one doc. Moves at a pretty good pace. The way you ended it leaves you at a crossroads so you have an open road to build it up. Always remember that in romance, its the buildup that makes the end result the reward. Hope to read more soon. Keep rockin
millet crunch jr chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Wait, what? Where did you get these medical procedures, off a cereal box? Did you even do a minute's worth of research into comas? Or hospitals, for that matter? Oh, wait, Max is a half doctor . . .