|Reviews for Waiting|
| Mishelle20 chapter 1 . 4/23
| naruto kurama chapter 1 . 3/30
Poor hiccup. but I like the story.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
Make it longer
| ScoreLaine chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
LOVED it :)
| violet flame chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
totally epic and touching it gave me the feels
| sauara chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
It's Red death by the way
| Riya Morut chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
I just watched HTTYD last week and was swept into the fandom. Now I've seen every episode of the TV show, too! I felt like the writers glossed over Hiccup's injuries. It's understandable (it is a kids' movie, after all) but still annoying for people like me who enjoy angst. Your fic is a nice interpretation of the village's thoughts. If I could suggest anything, it's to be more careful of your verb tenses. When you say "the village" it seems like third person, but you also kept using "we" and "our" for first person. It wasn't bad, just noticeable.
Good job, and please write more!
| Book girl fan chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
I liked it. I think the only thing you could do better would be to change the formatting so it isn't centered.
| Shara Raizel chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
This was really sweet. I loved it! :)
| Frostbite Brandson chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
I loved it
| Rebel S2 chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
Awww...that was pretty sweet. Though I don't know who's point of view it was narrated from.
| TheRagingRussian chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
I LOVED IT
| beautiful-surreal chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
| LoveBites-13 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
| JJ chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
I really like it! Good job!