|Reviews for The Shinobi Test: First Mission|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
LOL! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Sad beginning (not a ig surprise tho... ****ing Hyuuga. Anyway, I like the new girl, and the reserve teams idea. I also like the arcs thing you'll be doing, sounds great, and I'm looking forward to them. Great story/sequel.
| dgj212 chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
for one hinata died
| cmcwiki chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
very nice. i am glad to see this getting continued
| Danvighar chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Definitely a world that deserves to be explored.
Hinata's suicide brought to mind an anecdote I read in either a fantasy novel or a fanfic of a young woman, "protected" from ever being allowed to see any man but her father, arranging to "pick the wrong mushrooms for dinner" and poison both herself and her father. You haven't shown us Hiashi alive on-screen yet...
I don't know if Rika is a reference to anyone/anything, but she definitely fills a skill gap in the Rookie Crew, since TenTen's focus is on ranged weaponry. I'd like to see more of her.
| Serene Grace chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Poor, poor Rika. It is a highly known fact that Team 7 is a VERY dysfunctional team. Especially now in the canon story. DON'T FORGET ZE UPDATEZZZZ!
| Kyugan chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
I would SO, SO love to rub it in Sasuke's face that the Kagebunshin also duplicates whatever the user has on him. All Naruto has to do is hold the paint brush while he uses the jutsu and BAM, instant workforce
| karthik9 chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates
| Parzival vi Britannia chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
i like your idea of arcs.