Reviews for Ragged Edges
KareBear923 chapter 1 . 5/2/2017
That was so beautiful! Seriously one of, if not the, best everlark first-time fics I've ever read! All the love the have for each other I just... *clenches fist over heart* love it so much. It was perfect, thank you so much for writing it!
dregala.dbm.gov chapter 1 . 7/23/2016
this is the kind of smut that is so sweet and pure and over all just perfection it makes your heart full
Guest chapter 1 . 2/18/2015
Wonderful
Pari B chapter 1 . 2/4/2015
This piece is really beautifully written. There were so many lines that I found myself rereading just because they were so wondrously profound. I think my favourite though was " A routine skirted with the ragged edges of honest moments." Your writer's voice wraps itself so mellifluously through this that the story reads more like a love poem than anything else. Even the 'lemon' scene is less smut and more the exuberant yet inexperienced explorations of two young people in love.
NotMyBabies chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
OMG I'm so glad you wrote this! When I read the story and it faded to black, I was like NOOOOOO. But unf this was so good.
TheFandomThief chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
This is so beautiful and heart warming!
This is probably the best smut I have ever read.
Thank you!
Jeg elsker din skriftligt!
(I live your writing in my language) haha
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
that's cute. :D
notecrafter chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
Beautiful! I love it!
OlgaNicole chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
Very nice. Thank you!
MockingjayA chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
(Audible sigh)...3
Katniss730 chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
This was beautiful, just the right mix of sexy and sweet. I love how you've captured the evolution of their love for one another.
Northern Light1000 chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
Wow! Fabulous story! So sick of all the porn out there. This is cleverly erotic and oh so sensual!
VanillaSnowflake chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
This was so amazing, so passionate and sweet. You've stayed true to Katniss and Peeta's characters from canon and the description of their first time together was beautifully written, just the perfect amount of hesitancy and desire.
Caira1 chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
Beautiful work!
Yup chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Holy shit that was so
Perf
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