Reviews for Mortal Plaything
kaayrakoi chapter 1 . 4/7/2016
So gooooooood! I absolutely love your work and would love to see some of your Loki x reader become multichaptered. Such wonderful work, can't wait to read more!
Shield agent hummingbird chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
Please continue I need more
InsaneAndHappyAboutIt chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
wow...I have to be honest. I've never read a story (a smutty one at that) where i was a character (technically speaking) Damn...It's like all my dirty dreams (of which there have been a surplus since seeing Thor 2) written down and my, what brilliant writing it was! just WOW... XD
SophiaGrey chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
Bravo! Holy Christ in a fucking hand basket! I think I need a cigarette after this, your writing is amazing!
JK-Quinn chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
This is the best thing I've read in my life- and I've read a LOT.
MontresorMari chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
ęnę... My reaction

O.O O-O O_O GAHHH- *nose bleed*
I always thought that Loki would be the receiver while Thor to be the seme. Guess not in this fic... xD still enjoyed though!
Alisia chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Woah. That was hot...
Shelle chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
this is the absolute best thing I've ever read. so well worded and put together I LOVE IT! I really felt there and I'm now exited to go back to school because it won't be too long before Loki comes to sweep me off my feet, again! :p
OpheliaxEternal chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Had to review this! I loved it! Omg what glorious smut you have composed! I hate when reading smut when the guy calls the girl little- my little this or her little what have you- it just creeps me out, but here I thought it was tastefully done. I think there were some original positions in this and very believable dialogue, I really liked it!

Thanks for writing this!... write another one ;)
cinder16 chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
another please! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Oh. Yes.
Isaha chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Fuck, I can't believe you even thought about writing this. It was such a turn-on, and more. Touched myself reading it. And I think actually both of the brothers are very much my type xD Thanks !
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Oooh I hope there will be a second part to this one...!
Enosimania chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
This was a whole festival of awesome smut. There are no words.

I will say though, there were two bits I especially loved: when she (or, the reader? I'm not normally a fan of 2nd person narratives) refused to kiss Thor and he felt hurt and damn all the feels; and when Loki was "almost concerned" about it hurting her. I melted into a puddle, and it wasn't even a dirty one.
I can't wait for an update on this (and then another, and another).
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Wow. That was the perfect erotic story imo. And even better to see believable dom Loki over Thor. Wow again. Gods I wish I wasn't on a bus...
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