Well, my hatred for the character of Jane Foster just increased...

Oh no. It's about to become "I'm mind controlled by a purple titan" angst. Gross

I love your idea. But, Loki was too reckless and stubborn. I know that he was a prince, God of Mischief, God of Lies, etc. But, seriously, he acted on his own almost all of the time without even thinking of the consequences. He couldn't even hide his emotions well. I felt like there was more than one Loki because of his action and mental state

Was that Carl Mordo?

This here? It ought to be professional. This is amazing and spell-binding. I love it!

As with all the previous chapters: good story telling and excellent writing
Thanks

Not bad all things consider but I got to say Loki feels very ooc in my opinion and also alot weaker then he should be. Both mentally(like wtf is with his emotional state he's a god of deception and lies but can't seem to lie to save his ass, he should have better control of himself and others perception of him) and magically, like doom should have been maybe in minor nuisance not some real threat. Loki might not be Thor but he still one of the best warriors\mages of Asgard and while Thanos is stronger I don't think he could dominate his mind so quickly, after all in Canon he's had months to mold Loki's mind as he needs it and Loki had no one else, where now he does have someone to fight for. Loki was also never so conflicted with his nature he whole accepted his place as God of mischief Prince of lies where here hes kinda like a whiny teen girl about it

Gosh I really hate Jane.

Very interesting story. definitely have to go to AO3 and check out more of it

The big thing in this story is that it forms a new world where Loki has not attacked the Earth like in The Avengers, but has the Loki who has just fallen from the Bifrost in Thor, and it's very interesting to see what kind of relationships he can form with Natasha, Clint and Tony, who have not even formed the Avengers yet. It's also a very interesting study of brokenness, and growth. It's on the constant journey of finding out what it means to care about someone.

It's so bittersweet that Loki has to go from one place to another in the interludes... Once he lets himself form relationships with people, he soon has to leave them because there are people after him... Very well written.

I'm reading your story again. What a great agent adventure with feels! The ancient artifact of the forgotten people on chapter 7 is very well thought.

I get why Jane would be angry but- wow. She's a bitch.

Okey, for people who are waiting for update: this FanFiction is completed in AO3

Brill as always xxx