Reviews for Fractures
MistEternal chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Really heartbreaking and well done. Love seeing Kaidan trying to take care of her and her (barely) letting him.
PinkiePie chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
More damn you!
Amiisarr chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Beautifully written. As hard as it is for me to say, I love the idea of a broken Shepard. In all the games, it always seemed unrealistic, the way that she seemed to have no psychological repercussions from everything she had gone through, and as dark as it is, I think it makes Shepard a character that is easier to understand, to connect to, when she is damaged as she is in your story.
I've read a few Shenko stories that travel down the same path as this one, but not in such a way as you have, and I appreciate the simplicity with which you capture Commander Shepard as well as the broken woman who was forced to go through more than any person should ever have to endure.
I'm excited to see where this will go, and look forward to the next (if there is to be a next) chapter.