Reviews for A Tale of Hedgehog
Blazedragon94 chapter 7 . 3/24/2014
This story is very exciting. Cant wait to see what happen next
SonicAnime2010 chapter 6 . 12/12/2012
Bardiche does address Fate as "sir", that's because he's more of an old-fashioned type.. and this interpretation of "sir" is not discriminated by gender.. and it's appropriate for Bardiche to address Fate as such because she is the master. Now, about the arrest.. Property damage would have been much more short, but formal and to the point, that's how I imagine they'd score those charges
SonicAnime2010 chapter 5 . 12/4/2012
Bruising his pride if he saw the naked bodies of his wives.. uh.. Sonic's married to them, so there really wouldn't be and pride bruising.. With the possible exception of Vivio, the girls wouldn't really mind if he joined in I bet.. Now if it was Hayate, they'd be watching out, she's a not-so-sneaky perv and cosplay maniac. Interesting update
SonicAnime2010 chapter 4 . 8/17/2012
Nothing really to complain about as far as canon and personalities... interesting on what's going on with Angel Island.. can't wait to see whats next
SonicAnime2010 chapter 3 . 8/11/2012
Well, it's really debatable if Nanoha's clumsy persay... just watch out when she gets into "white devil" or "befriending mode" because what's interesting about her is that she's the friendliest person you'll ever meet, and she can make friends with those who hold grudges with humanity as stated in the anime she debuted in, Triangle Heart; but also at the same time she can intimidate the living daylights out of others who are probably twice her age at that time... There's no doubt that Nanoha favors more of the intellectual and tactical aspects of magic..
There is one little flaw I noticed, the classifications aren't too accurate in terms of magic in the terms of magic rank and type. There's Ground, Aerial and Synthetic. Ground mages generally lack the ability and balance to sustain a flight spell. Aerial mages are suited for combat up in the skies and can alternate from up-close and personal melee to the fire and forget longer range spells. Both Fate and Nanoha are Aerial Mages as they both have the spell capabilities of flight and still able to hold it. Fate is easily able to hold her own in close quarters with her magic, and at the same time still able to shoot a few powerful spells. Fate has far more power up close in her fighting, which did initially give her an edge over Nanoha in the original series, but despite that, she still took the loss in their last fight. The same can be said for Nanoha actually too, she usually won't go melee but when she does she can connect to make it count. She will probably be the first to say that she's not a real powerhouse in the physical fighting, but that doesn't mean she's completely defenseless up close.
Interestingly enough both Nanoha and Fate have (at least) each 1 win and 1 loss against one another. When it came down to decisions, Nanoha lost their first one but came back to win the second match that came to decisions.
Speaking of decisions, I'm starting to lighten up on the decision to continue reading, meaning I liked this one and would like to see how it goes from here
SonicAnime2010 chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
Now I shall continue the review because I don't like writing the same thing for two chapters and I just caught notice of this one...

To be honest I am a bit on the fence here as to how I feel about this story. Part of me likes that there is another Sonic/Nanoha crossover.. but another part of me feels a bit cheated... Some of the driving elements were used from my story.. Sonic's relationship status with being married to Fate and Nanoha for instance.. Not that I'm fuming about it or anything, I'm not exactly that kind of person.. I just wished I had a bit of a heads up on this.

Now as to other things.. as noticeable the chapters were short, but understandable... a few grammar issues here and there, but again not damaging how it turned out..

As for the overall story itself.. if you're using the magic elements from the Nanoha-verse, it would help to explain how the elements worked out in this AU story.. and how the events of the Sonic canon AND the Nanoha canon worked out if it's supposedly Alternate Universe...

For now though, I'll follow the story and see where it leads, but I'm still really mixed as to how I feel about this..
SonicAnime2010 chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Twitch...twitch... I'll start there... review to be continued
birdy1564 chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
so far so good though it is a bit short, you mention this takes place after strikers and generations, would that be possible of seeing the past characters and classic characters or atleast mentioned
birdy1564 chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
well I'm very happy to see another sonic/nanoha crossover fanfiction(though I wonder if you had borrow some ideas from the other sonic/nanoha crossover fanfiction), I do wonder how this would go