Reviews for Careless Whisper
Akhenaten IV chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
Excellent, tight writing. Well polished. Also an enjoyably unresolved sense of dramatic tension.
deelove1 chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Very well done a Pete POV would be great.
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CherryCarver chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
I'm reading these out of order, and they all fit beautifully. Great attention to detail.
Bamboozlepig chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Cool story! I always wondered where in your timeline Jim realized he was starting to feel something for Pete. I like how Pete blows hot and cold and doesn't mind intimidating Jim when needed...definitely very nicely in character as far as canon goes because we know on the show he could be an ass when he wanted to be. I also like Jim and Jean's interaction here, you know I hate the stuff that portrays them as the ultimately perfect couple, and so it's interesting to see a bit of disconnect and discord between them as she tries to be the happy little homemaker and he struggles with his feelings for both her and Pete.