Reviews for Will miss parker be able to catch Jarod this time?
Katescats chapter 3 . 11/1/2013
Hi I just read your story it was good and I hope you do more chapters.
anonymouse2u chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
You should continue. Thanks for doing something original!
rgdvii chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
You should continue I'm interested to where it is heading but proof read it before you post it ...I'm not trying to be a jerk in any way just trying to help.
trinity chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
I liked you story. Please continue. I'd love to read more about it and how this could possible end. :)
Nancy chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
An interesting premise. Jarod calls MP, says she should take a vacation; MP hops a plane, jumps into a cab, sees Jarod, and tails Jarod in the cab. Now, the question is: is J aware of MP's presence. If he is unaware, she has a chance; if he is aware, he will most unlikely outmaneuver her and try to persuade her to join him in his vacation. Hopefully the later is what you do: it is rich with opportunities. And, who knows, maybe there will be love in the air? Thanks for sharing with us. Please, please continue the writing so we can read which ideas you have chosen to follow. Please post again soon for us.
yepa chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
I'm waiting for the next part because its a really good start !
Alfonsa De Gama chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
I'm looking forward to the next chapter !
Very very interesting start!