Reviews for Blood Moon
EgyptAdbydos chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
This was well written and Jane was kept in character you nailed her character well. Great job. :)
Skoellya Seyth chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Very dramatic :) There's still a couple of sections that I'd recommend changing formatting on- only tidying, really- this was very well done. I liked the phrase "ripped through the air"; really a good use, that. A very good balance between dialogue and description here; and emotive!
4MeJasper chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Fun portrayal. Now time for Dinner!