Reviews for Line of Fire
perfect.fluke chapter 44 . 2/20
I'm kinda hoping this is a love triangle thing. Like Bane is enamoured with Lucy, but her and Will are going to be together.
perfect.fluke chapter 45 . 2/20
Great chapter. can't wait till you update again. What bane's plans are with Lucy is still having me reeling. Hope she doesn't turn bad.
basilbeast chapter 45 . 2/16
I just read the whole thing and my gosh it's just too good! You're a great writer and I can't wait to see what happens next! But please don't kill Will. Or John. Or anyone for that matter
Seven Dead Men Walking chapter 35 . 12/15/2016
I feel like either Will or John will die, I don't want them to die though... ;-;
harleyquinn87 chapter 2 . 10/14/2016
Great chapter!
harleyquinn87 chapter 1 . 10/14/2016
I JUST started reading this and I love it!
brandibuckeye chapter 45 . 8/12/2016
Great chapter.
Messy Ink chapter 45 . 8/8/2016
Ahh I was hoping against the odds that John would see right through Miranda! You'd think she'd be more careful about what she says to whom, considering she knows perfectly well that John is Lucy's brother. He better catch on to her soon or I'm going to virtually revoke his title as 'detective' :)
ZabuzasGirl chapter 45 . 8/8/2016
Wonderful!
Update immediately, please!
brandibuckeye chapter 44 . 7/30/2016
Great chapter. Loved it!
mercenary2.0 chapter 44 . 7/28/2016
Aww! That is so sad. I feel like if I was in Lucy's place I would go crazy!
ZabuzasGirl chapter 44 . 7/28/2016
Wonderful!
Update immediately, please!
BrynnTurpin chapter 43 . 7/10/2016
This is soooo good! I totally thought she was gonna be dead. And you did really well with Talia's character. ️
NotoriouslyN chapter 43 . 7/9/2016
Woah. Woah. Woah. I love this fic and that's saying A LOT since I can't survive reading a fanfic long enough when there's really very little of romance and such
brandibuckeye chapter 43 . 7/9/2016
Great chapter. I think you got Talia perfect, loved the interaction between her and Lucy, please update again soon!
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