|Reviews for The Damned|
| someone chapter 25 . 3/21
oh. my. god thatwasamazing
| Doctor-Rapunzel-Charming chapter 25 . 6/28/2014
I was told to read this one before the other one and I have to say this is beautiful.
But I have to say one think, because of you I ship JimXJohn.
| TheChildOfTheTardis chapter 25 . 6/18/2014
That was absolutely fantastic! Epic, gritty, exciting, funny, exhilarating, romantic and very very very readable.
| Foxtail2000 chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
OH MY GOD I LOVE THESE STORIES YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER
| that-fangirling-fangirl chapter 25 . 6/7/2014
OH. MY. GOD. I READ THIS ENTIRE STORY IN ONE DAY AND I AM ABSOLUTELY IN LOVE WITH IT! IF IT WERE A PERSON I WOULD MARRY THEM! THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING DISNEY FANFICTION I HAVE EVER READ!
You tied the stories in well and the relationships between each of the characters is a proper, real life relationship, not just the fairy tails that most of these characters appear in.
I must say, I was slightly dissappointed I didn't see a lot of Jack Sparrow (he is THE best) but other than that this is perfect.
It's incredible and I'm going to go and read the sequel right now.
Keep writing- you have a real talent for it!
| My Review Account chapter 9 . 10/8/2013
. . . what
| CuriouslyAlex13 chapter 25 . 7/3/2013
Ahh this story is so brilliant; I love it! All I wanted to do was keep reading, haha. Definitely one of my favorites. Can't wait to read the sequel! :)
| Rain of the Forest chapter 25 . 5/21/2013
WHAT THE HELL! HOW CAN THIS BE CONTINUED IF THIS STORY IS COMPLETED!
Jack: Try looking at the other stories in her log...
| Rain of the Forest chapter 9 . 5/20/2013
I soooo called it...
| Rain of the Forest chapter 4 . 5/14/2013
OHHHH! Don't tell me John loves Jim...
| PrincessBelle2 chapter 22 . 3/17/2013
Awsome! I do so love Captain Jack Sparrow and Barbossa - especially when they argue over the ship! (Even though it is Jack's, by right!)
| Suzerenma chapter 25 . 1/19/2013
I'm sad to see this story come to an end. I think the ending was somewhat rushed, but the conclusion was very sweet. Wonderful story nonetheless and there is no doubt it is still one of the most original fanfictions I have ever encountered. Great work! I suppose this means more time for more brilliant ideas? ]
| bs13 chapter 25 . 1/12/2013
I know it's completed, but I had to review. I've been hooked on it all this morning. It's amazing, I'll be looking for that sequel!
| Searching For Wonderland chapter 25 . 1/7/2013
Oh my goodness Avril, where do I begin? I was left…my goodness…I was left speechless almost! This is beautiful and I cannot even begin to describe how wonderful a writer you are! Keep up the great work – I loved reading this! The fact that Jim and John are finally back together made me smile like there was no tomorrow! My O-T-P is finally back together, and I cannot even to describe the feels! I'm actually rather happy that Meg and Hercules got their happily ever after and the possibility of there being a sequel makes me SO happy - you have no idea Avril! Oh and thank you so much for thanking me at the end of the grand finale, this was one of the best Disney stories in the whole entire Disney Fanfiction Archive. It had a little bit of a romance, a whole lot of adventure, it had suspense, and it had loads of drama! This was a masterpiece and now that it has come to a conclusion – well, it saddens me but the fact that it ended with a “To Be Continued” instead of a “The End” made my face light up like a Christmas tree! Speaking of Christmas…Happy Late New Year! Anyways, keep up the magnificent work and you can definitely expect my reviews when it comes to your story “Why Are You Crying?" I can’t wait –great story, great writer – just beautiful Avril! :-)
| Agent Darcy Lewis chapter 25 . 1/5/2013
amazing ending to an amazing story. Well done