|Reviews for Dancing with the Devil|
| HairyLimey chapter 38 . 9/10
Wait hang on a second Betty went to collage with Shego? Doesn't that make her just a touch on the young side? Let's face it she runs an international crime fighting agency so i would expect her to be in her 40's at least.
| FFaddict007 chapter 4 . 8/29
Like the chapter the only thing I can criticize is the use of 'he' which becomes redundant when describing Shego at the end . We already know she looks like a guy from the conversation with her mother and how its described she speaking to her son, when you go on to describe everything Shego does with he it becomes repetitive for the idea that she looks like a dude to everyone is already in our heads, also its kinda distracting visually seeing a bunch of these ' ' in the paragraph. Fun chapter, character are written in a lively way. Shegos mom seems sweet but a painful sort of sweet, like when u get cavities. Jaja
| CorruptMinds chapter 7 . 8/29
Haha! I knew it was a good idea to keep on reading! I may not have read much, but I'm hooked; done for; no turning back for me now. Woo
| CorruptMinds chapter 4 . 8/29
I think I'm going to lose my mind from reading all of these "he's". I fear that a good portion of the story may be like this, though I continue to read for the plot interests me.
| Fykatherine chapter 40 . 8/20
I'm glad you decided to update, I actually unfollowed this story a while back because the lack in updates. this is a great story and I hope to re-read it again once its done :)
| Kennayil chapter 40 . 8/19
Good update. I do wonder what your devious li'l mind plans (via Shego) for Betty though. Should we be feeling sorry for her?
| IHK chapter 40 . 8/17
Go and kill will do a favore to humanity you sick pervert and freak of nature.
| xbox432 chapter 40 . 8/15
Stoked about the fact that Shego is in the clear, looking forward to seeing Kim's reaction to the news. And the realization that why Shego was avoiding her was because she was working on this
...Wonder who she'll try to set Betty on a date with?
| Guest chapter 40 . 8/15
The most suspenseful chapter of this story I've read. Well worth the wait.
| Jay aka Jordan chapter 40 . 8/14
Shego you are boss
| jim89 chapter 40 . 8/14
Monique having to run distraction to keep Kim busy. Well shego sorts things out
I think Monique you stuck with mission impossible. No pun intended but trying to stop Kim in this matter for any length of time. The be like trying to stop a flood with a teaspoon. If not gonna work
I feel bad for Ron usually the two remaining girls in his life Kim or Yuri
makes you wonder who Yuri's arranged to marry? You see someone pretty important to me better than Ron. Mystical monkey master legendary master martial arts. A world hero and savior and independently wealthy. Heck, the only strike anything against Ron here is that even American and not Japanese.
Also, given Yuri's obvious interest and Ron cheaper for Ron and her arranged marriage partner. Maybe I'm just romantic in this and hoping that. Ron and Yuri will get together.
Thankfully. Monique has logic and little bit of reverse psychology to keep Kim
As for the kitchen staff I think they're very happy when they see Monique show up it's distracts Dragon Lady from attacking them for a minute. The funny thing is, most of her wrath of the kitchen staff is brought on by themselves. They screwed up. She lets him have it. I mean really messing up the salt and sugar in dispensers
As a novice mistake. Professional chefs should not even come close to screwing up like that. Maybe they're having a bad day or maybe shego is like the boot camp instructor giving them a refresher course I had to be top-notch kitchen staff
The debating whether to give shego deal and sticking point. After 12 hours of negotiation is her love life who she might've slept with. And when?
What I sense that the whole committee here is actually a bunch of middle-aged men that are flaunting over the idea of shego and catsuit, she's offering genuine genuine Intel and several criminal organizations and later hung up on their sex life
Ironically, if the same deal made by a man. It probably would've finished debating it. And like 20 min. smart play. Not mentioning who she was really interested in what it probably delayed as for another two weeks as they brought Kim in for questioning and trying to seduce her. I.e. corrector for the greater good
or some other BS come up with
Of course negotiations with quite simple. She gives them something they want right now, and they give her the deal then contacting her a few hours. It just them confirming what she said. But think about it. She technically gave them 4
villains and major schemes and removing herself being a major villain as well.
At five villains out of commission and of enough to seriously put them away.
I'm surprise you didn't go for something a lot bigger like the resource network or
WWEE. Something so big it would cripple the villains infrastructure
they might never recover from.
We shall see
| BloodAuthor chapter 40 . 8/14
loving the story
| Almighty Rainbow Dash chapter 40 . 8/14
I loved it. I'm surprised my patience lasted this long.
| fullmetalalchemist26 chapter 40 . 8/14
OOooh an update! Go Monique for actually managing to talk Kimmie down! Not an easy thing to do haha! Also "Bett's, holy shit!" hahahaha!
| Poetheather1 chapter 40 . 8/14
That was a really good chapter. You are heading nicely to the payoff, the meeting taking that long was fun, and Shego's stress was very believable. Well done.