Reviews for Dancing with the Devil
IHK chapter 40 . 8/17/2015
Go and kill will do a favore to humanity you sick pervert and freak of nature.
xbox432 chapter 40 . 8/15/2015
Stoked about the fact that Shego is in the clear, looking forward to seeing Kim's reaction to the news. And the realization that why Shego was avoiding her was because she was working on this

...Wonder who she'll try to set Betty on a date with?
Guest chapter 40 . 8/15/2015
The most suspenseful chapter of this story I've read. Well worth the wait.
Jay aka Jordan chapter 40 . 8/14/2015
Shego you are boss
jim89 chapter 40 . 8/14/2015
Monique having to run distraction to keep Kim busy. Well shego sorts things out
I think Monique you stuck with mission impossible. No pun intended but trying to stop Kim in this matter for any length of time. The be like trying to stop a flood with a teaspoon. If not gonna work

I feel bad for Ron usually the two remaining girls in his life Kim or Yuri
makes you wonder who Yuri's arranged to marry? You see someone pretty important to me better than Ron. Mystical monkey master legendary master martial arts. A world hero and savior and independently wealthy. Heck, the only strike anything against Ron here is that even American and not Japanese.

Also, given Yuri's obvious interest and Ron cheaper for Ron and her arranged marriage partner. Maybe I'm just romantic in this and hoping that. Ron and Yuri will get together.

Thankfully. Monique has logic and little bit of reverse psychology to keep Kim
busy temporarily.

As for the kitchen staff I think they're very happy when they see Monique show up it's distracts Dragon Lady from attacking them for a minute. The funny thing is, most of her wrath of the kitchen staff is brought on by themselves. They screwed up. She lets him have it. I mean really messing up the salt and sugar in dispensers

As a novice mistake. Professional chefs should not even come close to screwing up like that. Maybe they're having a bad day or maybe shego is like the boot camp instructor giving them a refresher course I had to be top-notch kitchen staff

The debating whether to give shego deal and sticking point. After 12 hours of negotiation is her love life who she might've slept with. And when?
What I sense that the whole committee here is actually a bunch of middle-aged men that are flaunting over the idea of shego and catsuit, she's offering genuine genuine Intel and several criminal organizations and later hung up on their sex life

Ironically, if the same deal made by a man. It probably would've finished debating it. And like 20 min. smart play. Not mentioning who she was really interested in what it probably delayed as for another two weeks as they brought Kim in for questioning and trying to seduce her. I.e. corrector for the greater good
or some other BS come up with


Of course negotiations with quite simple. She gives them something they want right now, and they give her the deal then contacting her a few hours. It just them confirming what she said. But think about it. She technically gave them 4
villains and major schemes and removing herself being a major villain as well.
At five villains out of commission and of enough to seriously put them away.

I'm surprise you didn't go for something a lot bigger like the resource network or
WWEE. Something so big it would cripple the villains infrastructure
they might never recover from.

We shall see
BloodAuthor chapter 40 . 8/14/2015
loving the story
Mega Absol chapter 40 . 8/14/2015
I loved it. I'm surprised my patience lasted this long.
fullmetalalchemist26 chapter 40 . 8/14/2015
OOooh an update! Go Monique for actually managing to talk Kimmie down! Not an easy thing to do haha! Also "Bett's, holy shit!" hahahaha!
Poetheather1 chapter 40 . 8/14/2015
That was a really good chapter. You are heading nicely to the payoff, the meeting taking that long was fun, and Shego's stress was very believable. Well done.
jaygirl28 chapter 40 . 8/14/2015
I love this chapter I love the whole story it's amazing I can't wait to see what happens with shego and kim
TigerCritic chapter 40 . 8/14/2015
Brilliantly written, best story I have ever read, the characters aren't too OOC and I can see what youre trying to do. I believe this will be the best story in this fandom
Guest chapter 40 . 8/14/2015
Better suggestion for you vs us is: don't post any new fic until it is complete. Then, you can post it in parts or whole. People do not need motivation buy an author does. You need to find a eay to help yourself and have things become ritual and sorta on an appt. basis. Journal or save your new chapters and work on them at your pace. Either they stay unwritten, which is a shame or you will find,a way to deal with having less time to write. Writers block is a different area. Seriously, There is no need to stress/hurry yourself to put out a new work or have US become more invested and frustrated with min. updates. You will not get many new readers, if they see you do not update your stories...for months/years. Bottom line, Just save new stories until complete and finish the ones you have, when you can.
Dav7788 chapter 40 . 8/14/2015
I'm so happy you were finally able to update! I can't wait for Shego and Kim to finally start talking again! I'm excited for the next update.
Guest chapter 40 . 8/14/2015
Soo happy to see a new chapter this is one of my favorite stories. Keep up the good work.
wolvesarethebest chapter 40 . 8/13/2015
Love it!
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