Reviews for Dancing with the Devil |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This...Is...GREAT! Seriously I'd love for there to be more! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it and can not wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() That could have been so much better. Shego and Betty were out of character and it felt like you posted this chapter just for the sake of it. It didn't feel like your heart was in this chapter, you're usually a lot better than this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay u add more |
![]() ![]() ![]() It might be because it's been awhile since I saw the show/read this story, but I didn't know that Shego knew Dr. Director on a personal basis. Anyways, I love how easily Shego broke into the GJ building. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woot another update! Heh, really loved how this chapter started out with Shego sneaking into Betty's office and scaring/startling the crap out of her heh. It's always fun to sneak up on unsuspecting people. Only the trick is making sure they don't attack you when you do which I was kind of surprised Betty didn't end up in a combat stance or grabbed Shego or something of that nature due to her training and such. Woot story time! Next chapter going to be a recap of everything so far or will it skip the 'whole' story or possibly just mention bare facts/highlights? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeaaa update. Toooo short! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update asap! I'm loving this story! |
![]() ![]() I'll gladly beta for you. I rp as Shego on Tumblr. If you still need someone send me a message there. Askshegogo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() shego an idea. God help us all as for an old friend from college who would also have influence I can think of one possibility Dr. director it would fit. Think about it I guess we'll find out soon enough We shall see |
![]() ![]() ![]() I forgot shego went to college |
![]() ![]() ![]() To be honest I don't really see much problem with your grammar, true I could just be to drawn in to your story to notice... but if so, props to ya. Hmm, as to who Shego is going to see... Betty Director? I can't remember if they went to college together, but I seem to recall them knowing each other. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it and can not wait for more. |