Reviews for Heir
Guest chapter 33 . 12/30/2016
I know this has been abandoned, but I just had to comment! I just finished this story and I had to tell you how in LOVE with it I am! You did an amazing job. I haven't read all your stories but so far I have loved them all but this is by far my favorite.
- a fan!
skyeza chapter 33 . 12/4/2016
Here's to hoping that Tom isn't gone for good. Well I'm hopeful that to you start up this brilliant story again.
CLovesHarryPotter chapter 33 . 11/26/2016
Such a cruel cliffhanger! I can't wait to hear how everyone deals with this... "little problem". This has been an amazing read, such a unique perspective and not only is it interesting but it's incredibly well-written!
DemeRain chapter 33 . 10/15/2016
This story is amazing. Thank you so much for sharing!
MargaritaS chapter 33 . 10/8/2016
this is a fantastic story, i loved tom so much every time you mentioned the upcoming merge i was left with tears streaming down my face. i am really curious as to what you planned to happen next so i hope you do decide to continue the story someday, or go ahead with your rewrite :)
Aelirenn chapter 33 . 8/12/2016
I'm not sure why you are thinking of rewriting this as I have thoroughly enjoyed it. Yes I'm a glutton for punishment reading a story that is abandoned. Lol I just was curious about it and the summary sounded good. It far exceeded my expectations. I'm going to follow it in case you change your mind.
Guest chapter 33 . 8/7/2016
i just finished reading your story and there were a few things i just had to say...
I'm sorry that you won't be able to answer me but i have a few troubles logging in so... This will have to do...
First of all, i absolutely love Slytherin!Harry. In every form... But in most of those FF's Ron doesn't really get a chance... This time, i have to say it was marvellous. Ronald Weasley, the Chess Genius, Slytherin and apparently getting coirted by Blaise Zabini? Absolutely great. I really wish that you had written more, if only so i could get a glimpse on Ron/Blaise a pairing i never saw nor liked before but now seem to have fallen in love with...
Second, The Mind Breaker & The Mind Healer are very interesting characters... I just... i love how they are able to work together and even with only a few scenes, how their relationship seemed so... interesting, to say the least.
Third, normally i love Lucius but the Abusive Asshole in your Story deserves a Fate worse than Death... And don't tell me Prefect Bennet doesn't know of Rosiers little hobby! I am distressed with Draco's role as the poor victim in your story...
Even if you show his Thoughts so beautifully...
I love how you are able to give every POV a personal touch, as with my poor writing skills it all sounds the same. And your Conversations are also very great, Even if the often mentioned Pureblood Ettiquette doesn't come up that often in these...
I am quite certain i could spend more time i actually needed for reading it with praising your Story and the Relationships, the Characters, Your Style and the always present Logic. But it won't do because you abadoned this beautiful Story...
I can see that writting the actual merge and now, the process of Draco getting released and all these other Plot points that you put so neatly in place can be tiresome... But your Story captured me and now i don't want to let her go...
It is great...
And i know this might fall on deaf Ears but i would be delighted if this review at least managed to get you to reread your notes on this story/ your Story again.
Thank you for writing such a Beauty.
Even if i won't get more it still was a very adventurous read.
0oo CagedBird oo0 chapter 33 . 8/6/2016
...I can't believe you stopped it right here.

Why did I even bother reading an abandoned story?

But holy crap it's so good, this is literally right up there in my favorite stories list.

Like everything in this story is just amazing!

I absolutely love what you did with Ron.

And even all the ships in here are the one ones I'm cool with, not to mention my otp HPDM.

This my thought when I found this was that holy crap I've found GOLD.

So yea, thanks for writing such an amazing story.

...though I want to know what happened so bad. That cliffhanger tho XD

WrappedInRed29 chapter 33 . 8/4/2016
Please continue! I can't wait for another chapter! I love this story so much it is one of my go to favorites if I am ever feeling down. One thing, can you develop the potter/malfoy relationship because the sexual tension is killing me! This story gave me one of my favorite pairings of all time Snape/Voldemort! Thank you for bringing the characters alive once again and continuing and fueling my belief in magic.
CurleyQue chapter 9 . 6/9/2016
Femalefan chapter 33 . 4/16/2016
This is a good story and I'm not a Ron fan but your version is ok.
scarfire14 chapter 33 . 4/15/2016
*sobbing* why? WHY!? We just want to know! Does Harry's mind ever recover? Who is Ron's admirers! Does Hermione aid You Know Who? Do Garry and Draco ever confess? The plot thickens
Ottawa Pagan chapter 33 . 4/10/2016
awesome story :)
The Colonel chapter 26 . 4/4/2016
Starting to find the gay evil thing a little bit heavy handed now. So far, every character who has gone over to the "Dark Side" compared to the books has also been turned gay, and now Ron seems to be about to be transgendered for the cause as well. I'm at least as happy to hold a finger or two up to the politically correct mob as the next chap, but this is getting a bit much.
1000 chapter 1 . 2/10/2016
I loved this so much it's so sad that it's over. It was a great story but sadly abandoned
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