Reviews for A Suprise Visit
DevilOkami chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Oh I hope this becomes a chapter fic. I wonder if a little battle will take place between father and son.
myowncelestial chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Great Story.
Mistress Minty chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Poor Maria...running all that way just to be lied to in the end...No, but seriously, this had a lot of entertaining moments. I could clearly picture the disgusted expression Vlad wore when he learned who Lisa's mama was. I noticed quite a number of spelling and grammar errors, but eh. Nothing ever meets my RIDICULOUS standards (Even my stuff. Pfft.)

Is English your first language? I was just curious because some of the dialogue sounds a bit unnatural for English-speaking people. On a happier note, this makes another fic for my demented little archive! :D Thanks for writing more AluRichter!
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Beautiful. So nice it is true.