Reviews for Molten
iAnoved chapter 1 . 5/31/2016
You're very eloquent. Don't know if you were planning on continuing this story beyond this point, but it is definitely interesting enough.
Lala7807 chapter 1 . 7/31/2015
Omg this looks really good. I hope you decide to continue this... Of course after the legendary Girl I Need You is completed !
maijacob chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
I am very interested in this story please say that you will keep updating.
jharv241 chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Awesome first chapter can't wait to read more!
ihatevampslovewolfs chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Will you make this a story or is it a one shot?
yankeerose chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Looking forward to seeing where you take this story
A00000000000000023 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
damn now thats what i call good first impressions all she gotta say is rise young skywalker and the moment will be complete but anyways good chapter hope you continue
Vane3131 chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Like it so far . Thank you
DarkWhiteRose chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Great start, love it. U did a great job on writing on this story. Keep the great work up.
cloudshadow22 chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Ok, you definitely have an OOC Bella here if she is naked on the beach. I'm a bit confused by the timing. I think this chapter says that Jake has not yet phased, but I assume that when this was "written down," he did know about the shifters.

My favorite line here: "my world suddenly changed and was sucked back through a straw..."
JJjr chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
This is a very interesting start. I'm curious what happens next... :)