Reviews for The Train
maimay chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
I read the mainstory a few days ago and I loved it *.* You are a really good writer in my opinion. I love the continuation just as much as i love the mainstory, keep up the good work :)
Caribou chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Wow. Thank you do much for tge brief continuation. Your descriptive detail is absolutely gripping. You did an amazing job bringing the sobering atmosphere of a subway to life and I loved the way you incorporated the stifling feeling of being absolutely alone in a place of many.

Even though the Cyrus/Dawn interaction was brief, it was significant and very satisfying indeed.

Probably my favorite overall moment was when despite the fact that she tried very hard to forget Cyrus and the time spent with him, she "never [forgot his] face" even though he had changed so.

That was a theme of the original story that I loved because it expressed a sinister start and ended on a note of hope and a desperate goodbye to the person one loves. I envy your ability to capture beauty and inner change and growth in words.