Reviews for Fire in the Belly
Carling chapter 11 . 1/21/2013
This is the story that makes the original truly complete for me. All of the things that bothered me about the series were addressed and now I can be at peace with the original story. I am sorry that Ron had to be a casualty in all of this. He was a deeper character than I feel most fanfics that separate him from Hermione make him out to be. But I do think realistically, Snape would have grown beyond his death in the original story to be the man we see in this story, and he would have made the better partner for Hermione.
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 11 . 12/13/2012
More. More. More. Need More. This Is Soo Amazing! I'm craving More Of Your Writing. (Smiles) Xxxx
Ebony Starstorm chapter 11 . 12/11/2012
Utterly brilliant. C2'd and double-favorited. You have an author alert, too, though more for the Star Trek fics...
MollysSister chapter 11 . 10/31/2012
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Clap! This is a beautiful story. I know I will be back to reread it many times over. Do you have more ss/hg? What other fandoms do you write in?
MollysSister chapter 10 . 10/31/2012
Egads I never considered she was going back to a battlefield, that there could be danger other than voldyshorts and the snake in the shack. Zoinks! I was so worried she was going to die there in the past.
MollysSister chapter 9 . 10/31/2012
I am glad Hermione finally had the courage to tell Ron how she felt. I am even more releived that she didnt use the time turner to alter the conversation.

I am disgusted in both of them for how they treated Rose & Hugo. Hermione didnt say goodbye and Ron left them alone! I am grounding Ron & Hermione from apperating until they can do so responsibly.

I really hope Ron doesnt find out about Severus? I know I am being silly but it makes me cringe.
MollysSister chapter 8 . 10/30/2012
This is very quickly becoming one of my favorite stories. I love their adult banter, the backdrop of Buddism, even Harry. Its just wonderful.
MollysSister chapter 7 . 10/30/2012
HErmione doesnt seem attached to her children. Which seems to fit this unhappy person that she is. I wonder if she will just leave her UK life behind and go live in Napal. She could be happy there I think.
MollysSister chapter 5 . 10/30/2012
Hermione just got even more to think about, as did Harry. I am all sorts of curious about what sort of conclusions they will come too. Also where is Snape?
MollysSister chapter 4 . 10/30/2012
That damn yak butter is going to be the end of it all! Isnt Harry wealthy? Cant he quit his job and just be a student at the monestary?
MollysSister chapter 3 . 10/30/2012
I am not surprised at HErmione's unwillingness to beleive all the monks are trying to teacher her. Thats what she does, she questions. I do enjoy your Harry, his quest to learn more, to push the boundries of his desk job. THese two have to becareful or the yak-butter is going to bust them both.
MollysSister chapter 2 . 10/30/2012
I am impressed HErmione stood up to Harry. I wonder if Harry will let it lie?
MollysSister chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
I like that Hermione has her hands on a time-turner. What parent couldnt use on of those?
cathedral carver chapter 11 . 10/15/2012
That was just touching and sweet and sweetly beautiful, from beginning to end. I adore stories that embrace a slow buildup of romantic tension with a gradual but believable reveal, and this story does just that and more. Really, really well done. Hermione and Snape are just a perfect example of intellectual/romantic companionship. Plus, we ALL know that Hermione and Ron were just a recipe for disaster, yes? YES. YES WE DO.
MillieJoan chapter 11 . 10/5/2012
Lovely, lovely story. Your Hermione was spot-on; I love that you took the epilogue and twisted it to make it actually true to her character. Thank you for this.
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