|Reviews for Good Enough|
| Deathblow88 chapter 2 . 6/12/2013
I think 'Toku' means wolf in Japanese , so if you put 'shi' and 'toku' together you get 'Shitoku' .
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/11/2013
is there going to be more? i hope there will be! shitoku should make goku study. he is an absolute idiot!
| The Super Saiyajin Twins chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Dear person "Ugh"... What I meant is that Shitoku is older. And if it's the account name we really are twins so please... Stop being a critic? No need to insult. I'm just 10 anyway. Plus I have other problems. So stop bothering me or other people. If you need to tell me something say it in a reasonable way... Just tell me where you found the problem and I will fix it as soon as I can. Thank you... I guess?
| Ugh chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Do you not know what a twin is? You just lost like a bajillion intelegence points. Thats like saying twins can be different ages, which is to say its SO dumb I can't even come up with an analogy.
| AvatarfanDillon chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
Too short. should write more
| lilDBZbuddy89 chapter 2 . 8/9/2012
Shio certainly has her hands full with her younger twin, she doesn't seem to want to hide her irritation of her brother either! I love how she initially seemed suspicious of Bulma, telling Goku to keep an eye on her! She seems to have had a bit of an education compared to her brother, guessing Gohan taught her more than cooking? A nice start to the story.
The only thing I would say is read some of the longer sentences you have out-loud; if you can't say it all in one breath without struggling then see if you can put a comma in there. That was something I was always taught The writing was a bit jumpy in places but then I realised what you were doing with showing us who we were following, so then it made more sense :p Other than that, great start, the flow of the story wasn't too fast or too slow! We got a fairly good impression on Shitoku's personality though I'm sure more of it will come through as the story progresses :)
| lilDBZbuddy89 chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Gotta feel for Grandpa Gohan getting hit by two feisty Saiyans instead of just one! Lovely introduction, will be going straight on to the next chapter with anticipation!
| Deathblow88 chapter 2 . 8/5/2012
Nice! I can't wait for the next chapter!