|Reviews for Without the Pillars|
| shavini5995 chapter 7 . 6/21/2014
great it up.
| alltheway chapter 7 . 5/11/2014
Excuse me, I hate to say this but, Kazue is kind of mean. Please make her a little bit nicer. Thank you!
| DolphinsSwimming chapter 7 . 1/12/2014
I was impressed at the doubles match in this chapter. It was very well-thought out and paced.
Your writing can be quite choppy and uneven at times. You also have a tendency to mix up your tenses. Nevertheless, I find this to be a unique story that you've clearly put a lot of thought into.
I'm hoping the OC's can be fleshed out more because they tend to fade into the background when they aren't explicitly mentioned. They don't feel like canon yet, but I'm hoping you can work to change that.
Fuji as captain and Kaidoh as vice-captain will be an interesting mixture, and I'm glad you're exploring the different angles of each character. You've got a nice batch of character and character development here, and I can't wait to see how this new Seigaku team fares in the tournaments!
| Eru no Tsubasa chapter 7 . 12/29/2013
I love this! Fuji as captain and Kaidou as vice makes so much sense... I've always liked Yukimura and Sanada _
| sushixxx17 chapter 7 . 11/27/2013
| 9angels1idiot chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Wow, I have really never read any story like this. I think I've been into all the romantic side of fanfictions that I never noticed stories like these. It was really good though. You write like I'm actually watching a game happening. Plus, I love that this chap is about Yuuta, because I seriously love that kid.
Anyway, i shall continue reading on.
| fyerigurl chapter 7 . 5/29/2013
You are seriously one of the only reasons I still come back to this website.
Lotsa love (and a longer review later),
| Frog-kun chapter 7 . 5/28/2013
"He used to have eyes only for his brother."
YAOI GOGGLES ON.
Okay, jokes aside, good chapter and great insight into Yuuta and Fuji's relationship. Also the match felt very PoT-ish indeed what with people doing all this smirking and thinking about esoteric strategies and the Inui Juice mention towards the end.
My favourite scene was the last one, actually. I read it twice over. I love Kazue's mysterious personality so mention of "that person" feels pretty vague and struck me as very anime-ish dialogue. In a way, it almost seems strange for someone to say that in English, but what the hey. I think they were talking about Fuji then, probably. Or maybe Yuuta.
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/11/2013
Ooh, very exciting and original! I can't wait to see how Fuji would fare as Captain... he is quite like Yukimura, ne? XD
| debitum naturaes chapter 6 . 5/6/2013
This is a phenomenal story! Restores my faith in the Prince of Tennis fandom here. Please update soon.
| Acop chapter 6 . 5/6/2013
Ha thank you for the lovely chapter :) I love the fact that it feels like the manga, with all the things we like as Inui's juice but you still manage to make your own story !
And yay for Fuji in the end, can't wait to see more of him :)
| Frog-kun chapter 6 . 5/5/2013
I won't lie here - my favourite part of the chapter was the last sentence. Got me pretty pumped for the next chapter!
This chapter was largely a reintroduction of the Seigaku regulars, I felt. We see all the quirks of the characters play out for Yuuta's benefit - Kawamura's personality change, Inui's juice, the works. Now, I did appreciate this because it's been a long time since I've last watched PoT and it had a pretty familiar feel to it. This story really does capture the feel of PoT, except minus some of the adrenaline.
Overall, not a lot to say. It was enough to get me back into the mood for PoT. I felt like this was largely a chapter to bridge the main events together. The pacing has slowed down a little, too. I'm itching to get to the tournaments and the real meat of the drama, but I guess I'll have to keep waiting for now.
| Wondering Snow chapter 6 . 5/5/2013
Yayayay! Thank you so much! You *finally* updated! :D :D
Ooohhhhhh! This looks interesting! I can't wait to see Fuji play! He's totally amazing!
Please update asap!
| ACOP chapter 5 . 3/17/2013
I just found your story, and I really like it ! I'm a huge fan of Fuji and I have always wanted to see more of him and to explore what he could do if he really tried as a genius. I like how you integrate the various characters of prince of tennis in the spirit of the anime and your OCs are interesting for now. Just a tiny small little critic : I would like to see a little more of fuji :)
I'm looking forward to your next chapter !
| DreamUnicorn247 chapter 5 . 1/31/2013
Update soon! :)