Reviews for A Vacation That Didn't Turn Out But Love Wins Out
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
I like it thanks for not being vulgar on the sex part.
PrettyGirlRock24 chapter 7 . 10/4/2012
Update soon! Can't wait for more! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
good story use some dialouge. a beta reader may be helpful
Guest chapter 4 . 8/10/2012
Great story line, but u should really make your chapters longer. They r really short. Also please edit this, there r alot of grammer and spelling mistakes.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/8/2012
Can you please use better language and draw the reader in more. This is too repetitive. Try reading other fan fictions and taking tips from them. The concept of the story is good but the language is terrible and needs fixing.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/6/2012