Reviews for Haircuts and Birthdays
NoMoFanFic chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Cute one. A few typos here and there. It's hard doing first-person voice. Sometimes the way a person speaks and/or thinks in real life is not very conducive to the written word, and there can be pitfalls... using too many colloquialisms, using parenthesis at ALL (a no-no) and other things... I wish this had been beefed up a bit, the end felt kinda rushed. But cute.
jinx1764 chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Interesting take with the haircuts. I guess Jareth likes long hair, then? Grooming her to be queen one day? He was sweet in this one. Their dialogue was sweet too but not too much with the banter.
KaylaMarie16 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
I wish you had added more chapters to this story, it seems like it would have been very interesting :c
Ms. I-Don't-Update-Very-Often chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Sarah you derp, you never get it. HE LIKES YOU.
Pan's Box chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
N'aww! Jareth really is sweet :3

Pan x
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
WHY IS THIS A ONE-SHOT? AGH!

Haplessly demanding more from this story. Like a jerk.
Newbie83 chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Great story! Yes, it could be continued, but it is good enough as it is. A great one shot, or a great beginning.
artseblis chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Lovely reading!