Reviews for Façade |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story. Loved the oc's. You did a great job of writing a believable romance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved your explanation of apparation and particles and therefore the dangers strong weather would present - totally makes sense of splinching but it never occurred to me that apparating basically breaks you down into particles and reassembles you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The conversation between Hermione and Draco in the cafeteria was just gorgeous. I genuinely laughed out loud when he called himself enjoyable :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm enjoying this very much. Love the teasing between them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story :) |
![]() ![]() Omg I absolutely loved this! Once I started reading it I never put it down! Read it all at once! AMAZING! Bloody Amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was wonderful! The plot line was amazing, the characters - charming and you had me interested the entire duration of the story. I really liked Ella and Scorpius, each had interesting personalities in their own right. And I especially liked Erik, he was adorable! How you developed Draco and Hermione's relationship was great. They fed off each other wonderfully and I think if they had been actual friends in the series it would be like how you wrote it. Always bantering haha. Oh! And their personalities were great as well! SORRY ONE MORE THING - I liked how there was a subtle theme of the French language. The here and there phrases in French, how Malfoy knew French, the title of this story is even in French! (At least I think haha) Sorry, I just have unhealthy obsession with French. Okay now that this review is almost novel length, I will leave you with this. Absolutely wonderful job writing this and keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Short and sweet. :) A very nicely done epilogue. I loved the line "girlfriends are always that bit sexier than wives" - a ring of truth. :D Thank you so much for such a delightful piece. This is my first Harry Potter fanfic ever, and I'm glad I began with this. It came to me highly recommended. I look forward to reading more of your work. :) All the best! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice! I can't say that the reason he first considered marrying Astoria is a big deal. Where I come from arranged marriages are common. This doesn't seem bad at all. But I like the turn this chapter took. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just have to say, this was a very uncomfortable read. I really hate that Hermione stooped so low to fight with Pansy. And the whole thing seemed rather childish. ... Very well written. But very, very uncomfortable to read. ...I'm looking forward to the making up, though!...and am, of course, curious to know what kind of hold Pansy has over Draco... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Extremely sweet. Touching. Heart warming. Believable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so enjoying it too! I'm amazed at how easily your write dialogues. Loads and loads of conversation on sweet nothings...loving it! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed it too! It was perfect. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this conversation! Read it slowly and again in order to savour it before clicking onto the next chapter. :D |