Reviews for 4 Weeks
TrebledWriter chapter 12 . 10/26/2014
Aw that was a great story! Loved the ending!
TrebledWriter chapter 10 . 10/26/2014
There is Fiyeraba! And it's adorable!
TrebledWriter chapter 3 . 10/25/2014
Fiyero won? Good for him!
TrebledWriter chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
This looks interesting...I Like this so far!
Elphabalover101 chapter 3 . 4/20/2014
Ha! I knew Fiyero was gonna win!
Elphabalover101 chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
I wonder how this will turn out...
Wickedly Hope Pancake chapter 12 . 1/3/2014
AW! I LOVE IT! :D Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
Bookworm741 chapter 12 . 3/31/2013
Awww :) This was so cute ! I can totally see this happening and it made me smile :) They're just so amazing together!
Princess Twila chapter 12 . 3/26/2013
I'd call this a well-written story!
I know you already got reviews for this (I saw your author's note in response to HollyBush), but I'd like to offer my own suggestions regarding how to use proper verb tenses in writing. Your biggest problem is going between the past tense and the present tense in the same sentence. What I would suggest is reading your story aloud to yourself; this way, it forces you to focus on the words there, and you'll be more likely to catch a mistake in tense. Plus, speaking in the proper tense is much easier than writing in the proper tense, so by verbally proofreading your story, you will be twice as likely to catch tense discrepancies. I know it'll take longer, and in the excitement of just having written a chapter and wanting to publish it right away it will seem much like a chore, but it will make for a more enjoyable read for your readers in addition to giving you something to have even more pride over.
Once again, congrats on a lovely story!
Ultimate Queen of Cliffies chapter 12 . 3/10/2013
Yay! This was so nice and cute and awesome! :D
Going to start on Changing Fate right now. You got me hooked!
you're-not-your chapter 5 . 11/6/2012
She's allergic to water, right?
Aren chapter 12 . 10/15/2012
Awww those two... can I have Fiyero for Christmas?
Here I am, smiling like a fool... sigh...
It was great!
James Birdsong chapter 12 . 10/15/2012
These two chapters are cool _
musicgal3 chapter 12 . 10/14/2012
Awww, I completely love it! I adore it when people write Fiyero as liking to sketch, so you can imagine how much I loved this chapter! It's sad that it's the last, but I really love the ending - I think it's just so sweet; such a lovely tradition you have created. And I am so touched that you dedicated this chapter to me! I've never had that before, so I'm feeling very special at the moment. Thankyou! And thankyou for sharing with us such a lovely little fic. I can't wait to read your next and will definitely be keeping an eye out for it! :) xx
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