|Reviews for 4 Weeks|
| Wickedly Hope Pancake chapter 12 . 1/3
AW! I LOVE IT! :D Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
| MASTEROFEVERYTHING19 chapter 9 . 12/22/2013
is yero a scarecrow or human?
| Bookworm741 chapter 12 . 3/31/2013
Awww :) This was so cute ! I can totally see this happening and it made me smile :) They're just so amazing together!
| Princess Twila chapter 12 . 3/26/2013
I'd call this a well-written story!
I know you already got reviews for this (I saw your author's note in response to HollyBush), but I'd like to offer my own suggestions regarding how to use proper verb tenses in writing. Your biggest problem is going between the past tense and the present tense in the same sentence. What I would suggest is reading your story aloud to yourself; this way, it forces you to focus on the words there, and you'll be more likely to catch a mistake in tense. Plus, speaking in the proper tense is much easier than writing in the proper tense, so by verbally proofreading your story, you will be twice as likely to catch tense discrepancies. I know it'll take longer, and in the excitement of just having written a chapter and wanting to publish it right away it will seem much like a chore, but it will make for a more enjoyable read for your readers in addition to giving you something to have even more pride over.
Once again, congrats on a lovely story!
| Ultimate Queen of Cliffies chapter 12 . 3/10/2013
Yay! This was so nice and cute and awesome! :D
Going to start on Changing Fate right now. You got me hooked!
| you're-not-your chapter 5 . 11/6/2012
She's allergic to water, right?
| Aren chapter 12 . 10/15/2012
Awww those two... can I have Fiyero for Christmas?
Here I am, smiling like a fool... sigh...
It was great!
| James Birdsong chapter 12 . 10/15/2012
These two chapters are cool _
| musicgal3 chapter 12 . 10/14/2012
Awww, I completely love it! I adore it when people write Fiyero as liking to sketch, so you can imagine how much I loved this chapter! It's sad that it's the last, but I really love the ending - I think it's just so sweet; such a lovely tradition you have created. And I am so touched that you dedicated this chapter to me! I've never had that before, so I'm feeling very special at the moment. Thankyou! And thankyou for sharing with us such a lovely little fic. I can't wait to read your next and will definitely be keeping an eye out for it! :) xx
| Far-Longer-Than-Forever chapter 12 . 10/14/2012
Aww how cute! I am sad to see this story end, but love the way it ended.
| Caricature of a Witch chapter 12 . 10/14/2012
Awww that was SO cute, I love it! It's a pity the story is over now... It was beautiful!
| Far-Longer-Than-Forever chapter 11 . 10/10/2012
Awww, no. They just have to be together. That's how they work!
| Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 11 . 10/9/2012
Aw, poor Fiyero! He thinks she doesn't like him! Are we going to get a chapter from his POV, or is it all going to be Elphaba's? Update soon!
| david chapter 11 . 10/8/2012
i like this story:)
| Aren chapter 11 . 10/7/2012
What? Nooo... don't do this! Torture... I'm in need of some cuteness. And more chapters! *-*