|Reviews for Night of the Living Otters|
| Dax246 chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
What a great idea but there are some errors in spelling and grammar. I also don't think the characters are represented right.
| Edhla chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
This is a pretty damn awesome premise for a fic :) That being said, this chapter is very dialogue-heavy, with punctuation errors throughout that make it difficult to follow in places. Perhaps a go-through with a beta-reader would help, because you really have the potential for a great fic here. Good luck x
| MagicConan14 chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
The grammar's a little bit haphazard, but it's still understandable at least...
I want to see what happens! Please write some more!
| TROLL chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
make more plz.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
LAWL loved it.