Reviews for Phoenix
Lady Aya Rose chapter 11 . 8/16/2013
Such a lovely ending for a great story :p

Though I agree with the daughter being named Ashley :) Though I remember head cannoning a son name William...named for obvious reasons hehe.
Lady Aya Rose chapter 10 . 8/16/2013
Gunny :( when I heard her story it was :( Thanks for making someone else alive as well :D
Lady Aya Rose chapter 9 . 8/16/2013
I love that song too though I love all classical music.

The argument over not having it was very truthful, kinda fitted. Popping the question was just pure class :)
Lady Aya Rose chapter 8 . 8/16/2013
Now Shepard and Joker can make the limp brigade officially. Lol that was a bad joke.

Though no matter what I did my Normandy always took off. There can only be ever one Normandy. Thou minus the original but there is always loses in war. :p
Lady Aya Rose chapter 7 . 8/16/2013
Aww that's adoreable.

Though I have to say if the mini me survived everything that happened on earth and everything to come, it's going to be one hell of a strong fighter...Wait you sure the fathers not Wrex or Grunt ? Lol I jest :p
Lady Aya Rose chapter 6 . 8/16/2013
Love the in the mind state and can't wait for the reunions though one thing to point out Big Ben didn't get destroyed (cannonly) though neither did the red phone boxes, lol. Half expected to see a blue police box somewhere felt disappointed when I didn't lol.

Just have to point out your shep s name is great, I always go for Victoria :p
Lady Aya Rose chapter 5 . 8/16/2013
You know I half expected Joker asking the question that regards all of them...-Do you all love Shepard- and all say yes. Lol. Wouldn't surprise me actually.
That last line...Cute :D
Lady Aya Rose chapter 4 . 8/16/2013
Lol so I'm not the only one who regards Anderson as a father figure as well :D
Though thinking about it, there is going to be alot more of those people in the same boat :)
Lady Aya Rose chapter 3 . 8/16/2013
Always wondered why spacer sheps mom was always ignored other than the little conversations with Hackett and Garrus...Thanks for writing this bit :)

Though however her age has always puzzled me :p
Lady Aya Rose chapter 2 . 8/16/2013
Yay Anderson's not dead...My life is now complete.

You sorta made Hackett here in a sort of father figure role here..well that's the vipe I got here lol. Well I get the vipe from both of those two admirals so meh :p
Lady Aya Rose chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
I love that you kept EDI alive here and using that interesting conception on how she didn't get hit by the shiny red light.

Though that Tail and Garrus relationship has always ticked the bad boxes for me but ah well. :P Though she did say it was a one off...Meh.

Either way looking forward to reading more :D
KarenFanWriter chapter 11 . 10/30/2012
I've think this is the sweetest moment I've ever read of Kaidan and Shepard. I'm writing him having his sceond child also a daughter. he has two daughters. Vikki named after Victoria Shepard and this baby. which they name her Ashley too. in loving memory of her sacufice on Virmire.
KarenFanWriter chapter 9 . 10/29/2012
I see I'm not the only one who gives Kaidan a Daughter. i love your story. it helps me write him a little bit more better.
gracie21 chapter 11 . 10/29/2012
Loved this chapter! Really nice to see their thoughts throughout the whole new parent thing! Beautifully written!
Anonymous chapter 11 . 10/28/2012
Beautiful ending to an awesome storyI am so happy you published this epilogue. I was wanting to hear Shepard and Kaidan's reaction to their newborn daughter. Your insight is incredible-a job well done!
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