Awesome chapter!

Great fic but Kyubi is so out of character it hurts

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Your story is nice, but this Kabuto escapes has gone on a bit too long, don't you think?

The matches were pretty exciting except for the Naruto ones because I knew that he was going to wim every single one of them.

Now for the next match I think it would be interesting if Naruto lost against Hinata, so that she can see progress as getting as strong as him. Otherwise it will be just predictable with frosting on top lol

I liked this chapter.

That was an excellent chapter, and I'm eager for how the next one goes. Wow, those fights were really awesome, and it'll be interesting how the fight between Naruto and Hinata will go (and if Toneri will be watching it to see how powerful Hinata is). Also, I wouldn't be surprised if Toneri somehow set it up where they'd fight each other, to see if they'd hold back or not

good chap

Woohoo! AWESOME fights so far! What's the price of that Cursed Warrior thing Toki is using? Regardless, I look forward to seeing more of this fantastic adaptation of Naruto! Keep up the great work and stay safe from the coronavirus!

When Naruto is more like in 30min in a foreign country that in 12 years in his village...

The battle between Naruto and Okisuke was all kinds of epic. I wonder how far they would have gone if there was no ring out and the two of them were going all out instead of holding back since it was just a friendly tournament. And yeah, at first I didn't see it, but then I could see how Okisuke's use of wind could be with airbending in mind.

You did a good job with Mifune. "What if the Third Hokage was a samurai" was a very interesting way to approach him. Because it makes sense that the leader of the samurai could compete with the best of the ninjas.

I keep forgetting that Toki isn't an OC. Guess that my brain continues surpressing the memories of watching the filler hell between parts I and II. Though I find funny how Toki basically turned her brother's soul into her Stand.

While I also wrote a Naruto vs Hinata fight, mine was when the two of them were only at the beginning of their ninja careers, while here the two of them are easily not just Kage level, but stronger than most Kages, so it has potential to be of an even bigger scale than Naruto versus Okisuke.

Admittedly, that guy from Reddit had a point, at least if we take only what we saw in canon from the samurai, since they did little beyond just channel chakra through their swords. And yeah, Demon Slayer is a good source of inspiration on how to make somebody who fights with katanas as powerful as ninjas.

Excellent chapter as usual. Can't wait to read the next one!

yay it"s not death

Quite damn impressive

Currently lovin the samurai theme you have goin on, even if it’s just an arc!

As always, very cool chapter here.

Keep the good writing.