Reviews for Beneath this Sky
middlewife chapter 14 . 7/21/2014
Rosalie has a huge heart. I really like this one.
So the raiders got poor Adam after all?
middlewife chapter 13 . 7/20/2014
I can understand Bella's reluctance when it comes to Renee. Becoming a raider is kind of a deal breaker trust-wise.
middlewife chapter 12 . 7/20/2014
Wow, did not see that coming. Is it random where travelers turn up, or is it deliberate? Is it random who becomes a traveler? All these questions...
middlewife chapter 11 . 7/20/2014
Toms trying too hard t be nice. Does he genuinely have a thing for Bella, or is she right to harbour suspicions?
middlewife chapter 10 . 7/20/2014
The vampires have clearly relaxed their guard in some ways around Bella & Jessica. Why do they maintain the charade?
middlewife chapter 9 . 7/19/2014
I like the twit on Edwards age thing, very inventive. Will they change Jessica? Love the twists & turns of this story
middlewife chapter 8 . 7/19/2014
Edward is a time traveler too and I don't know whether to feel happy or sad about it. Is that why the vampires took him under their wing?
middlewife chapter 7 . 7/19/2014
Bella is great with the snappy comebacks. You do banter so well and so naturally
middlewife chapter 6 . 7/19/2014
That was so sad. Fear & ignorance are such powerful & cowardly tools sometimes
middlewife chapter 5 . 7/19/2014
The vampires clearly are very attached to Bella & Jessica. I hope that means they will keep them
middlewife chapter 4 . 7/19/2014
Love the banter between Bella and Jessica
middlewife chapter 3 . 7/19/2014
These raiders sound like a very particular kind of scum
middlewife chapter 2 . 7/19/2014
I'm really intrigued by this story and how they all fit together
middlewife chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
I've read up until chapter 5, and this story is amazing! It deserves more reviews
2old4fanfic chapter 20 . 5/21/2014
I hate to see this end. Such a creative take on afic with vamps.
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