|Reviews for Beneath this Sky|
| AbstractSong101 chapter 10 . 12/6/2012
I was so happy to see this in my inbox when I got home omg. Also, I feel that I should express displeasure at it being 3 weeks til the next update - and obviously I am sad I have to wait - but I'm away over Christmas too, so it actually works out quite well for me ;)
So when people are "surged," do they end up in specific (geographical) places? Or can they show up anywhere?
I love that Bella knows exactly what to say to Edward to get him to stop working, and he doesn't question where she's taking him. Cute couple are cute.
"he'd survived long enough to start to develop crow's feet"
I really liked this. I think sometimes we don't realise how much of an achievement it is to simply survive - even in a 'normal' world.
They were so sweet playing in the playgroud. Gahhh. I love them.
"He sounded out of breath. Could vampires be out of breath?"
HMMMMMMMMM. What was he up to? Kissing Jessica?
I died at the carlward line. I bet Edward does know ;)
Another lovely update, thank you! I can't wait for the next one! :)
| callmepagliacci chapter 3 . 12/6/2012
"he smiled like he'd invented it." LOVE THAT IMAGE. Really good. Evocative.
| 2muchtrouble chapter 10 . 12/6/2012
Sweet for them to relax a little in the playground.
| Camilla10 chapter 10 . 12/6/2012
Mmm, I didn't get the strawberry joke
| elizanne chapter 9 . 12/5/2012
Love this so far, can't wait to see where we're going.
| FemmeFatale914 chapter 9 . 12/3/2012
I know I have said this before, but seriously this is the only story where I have ever liked Jessica. I absolutely ADORE her and her wit. This story is my heart right now. Bedelia, you have my permission to continue being awesome
| FenixMJR chapter 9 . 12/1/2012
It was very nice to know a little more about Edward’s past, and Jess always a breath of fresh air
| malleelee chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
She fixes everything and he destroyed the world for her. Time is measured by the Surge. Grim place, but I would like to know it better.
| Amsinnettbrown chapter 9 . 11/30/2012
I absolutely love this story! It's easily becoming one of my favorite fics. Thanks for writing:)
| edward-n-bella-fr-eternity1207 chapter 9 . 11/30/2012
Wow the cupcake is a priority! Imagine that.. This story is really unique and intriguing! Absolutely amazing job! I cannot wait for more so update real soon! Xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
| jpbird chapter 9 . 11/29/2012
I am so lost in the story. The easy suspense keeps me on the edge of my seat. I'm usually able to get some idea as to where a story is going but definitely not this one. Seriously looking forward to the 9th and the next update. Thank you for sharing your talents with us
| TiramiSue84 chapter 9 . 11/29/2012
I only started reading this one the other day, and though I'm sorry that I only now find the time to leave you a much deserved review, I'm not sorry to say that I completely devoured every single chapter and just couldn't wait that one minute to leave you some love. So there. ;D
Loved it so very, very much! Intriguing storyline, superb writing, so many things left to be revealed and lots of room for even more to unfold. And maybe-hopefully some luv. ;D
Can't wait for the next chapter. You got me hooked!
| AbstractSong101 chapter 9 . 11/29/2012
Finally getting to read this properly! (I admit I skim read it on Monday haha, i couldnt resist!)
"it was just an ambulance"
It always surprises me when "normal" things are mentioned in this fic!
This might have been answered, I cant remember. Was there just one Surge? That took anyone from any time? And then did it dump them all in the same place (time), or did they land randomly? Or swap with people? Did anyone go back in time? Do we know what year the surge happened? What if people went back to before it happened?! SO MANY QUESTIONS. I definitely need to start up a cheat sheet. lol.
Oh wait, so the Surge happened 20 years ago from the fic, so 1996ish?
"Had Jessica been awake, she would've had several comments to make about that. Most of them probably would've centered around the possibility of getting Garrett in there and convincing him to parade around topless as well."
WAKE UP, JESSICA
"As soon as Edward dropped the board in his hands, Jessica hobbled across the room and wrapped her arms around his waist. He didn't seem to mind sympathy from this source. Rather, he returned the hug, patted her unruly curls, and whispered something in her ear."
"Carlisle took Edward back to Bella's room to check up on him"
No comment ;)
Oh my god, Jessica and Garrett are cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute.
DONT KILL JESSICA. You will break my little heart. I have faith in Carlisle and his medical ability.
"I still think we should add 'How Much is that Doggy in the Window?' to the rotation,"
Eeeeeeeeep, I guess Jake is right about turning Jessica might mean she ends up killing someone else's Jessica. Damn him!
"God, Jake, I know." Angry tears burned their way through her defenses, cracking her voice. "You think I want this? I'm sorry. I'm doing everything I fucking can to keep her human and make her better, but it's not working."
Bless her, she has been so strong :(
I think Garrett has already offered to change Jessica, and that's what he and Rose were arguing about...
"So," Bella said. "Since when do you and Garrett kiss?"
"I don't know what you heard," Edward said, his breath tickling her neck, "but he's not my type."
Now that is a shame ;)
LOL lol lol lol lol i LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEE Jessica.
Great update, sorry for alllll the questions haha. Can't wait til the next one!
| Purradox chapter 9 . 11/28/2012
I thought I R&R but I guess I was wrong. LOL.
Anyway. Such a good update. I was wondering when and if you were going to bring the issue if changing Jess up. Soooo looking forward to the next chapter.
| Rochelle Allison chapter 9 . 11/27/2012
this story transports. the chapter ends and i'm always left like...oh. hi.
loving the carefully crafted dynamics between characters.