|Reviews for Beneath this Sky|
| ibleedscarletandgray chapter 7 . 10/29/2012
It just keeps getting better - I love how you are revealing the past, little by little!
And Edward - well, it's time that he and Bella had a few benefits - they are friends, right?
| kjghkf chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
My emotions, oh god. When we're given a glimpse of Bella's past-life it really evokes such a lightening feeling, that life was once simple enough, and she has friends she doesn't see any longer. That revelation about Embry, it was expected because the events of the Surge are clouded in tragedy, but dear goodness it still hurts to finally know.
Gah the mystery of the prologue deliciously kills me, I know we're getting closer when we're given a new chapter...but I'm impatient as I kinda want to understand right this very second.
Also, I cannot believe this story has ONLY 7 chapters, it feels like I've been reading about these characters for much longer, it's a credit to how fantastic the world building has been so far. That I care about not only about characters we see, but those we don't see nearly enough of, always constantly wanting to know where everyone is and how they are doing. I really find Bella's relationship with the wolves fascinating, and now not so murky on the details of their distant relationship, I look forward to seeing more of it.
And of course, as ever, the dynamic that we read in the prologue, of Bella and Edwards relationship, is such a contrast to what we are currently reading in every chapter. It's fantastic, and of course I AM DYING with anticipation...you know what you're doing to us, and you probably love it.
Honestly I basically run when this updates.
| littlelizruth chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
Oh these kids... Even with all the trouble around people still find a way to act like high school students.
| enka3 chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
I wish Rose told Bella some secrets as well
| mugglemom08 chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
So. Carlisle, Jasper, Emmett, and Rosalie are vamps. Edward's human. Esme and Alice are no-shows so far. Bella knows about vampires, but they don't know she knows. Or, at least, she doesn't know that they know she knows. And they're all (except maybe the no-shows) are all working to figure out the whole time-traveling thing? And cure the effects? NGL, I'd love to see one-eyed Emmett in a tutu. :-)
| Ness1956 chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
| mugglemom08 chapter 2 . 10/28/2012
"Fine, have it your way. You really should phase into a mule instead of a wolf, you know. Stubborn ass."
- I totally read that in Reese Witherspoon's voice.
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
| mugglemom08 chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
I don't know how in the world I missed this when I have you on author alert, but I did. Not a clue as to what's going on, but I'm looking forward to finding out.
| sassy991 chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
Truly enjoyed this chapter. There were so many varying components to this update, it was like savoring a dish with different, wonderful bursts of flavor. Well done!
I've rarely said this about Rosalie in fanfics, but I absolutely adore her. You've really expanded on the vulnerability that lies within Rosalie, which was briefly done in the books but overshadowed by her cold, mean demeanor. You've made her your own character, one with real emotions and struggles, and it's absolutely beautiful to see her open up. The bonding her and Bella did at the end of the chapter, sharing the burden of their respective demons, shed new light on both characters and gave us a few answers. Now with an understanding of Bella's past, I'm curious as to see why Rose keeps Emmet at an arm's length. Could it have to do with the man who hurt her, whom she eventually killed? I look forward to finding out.
I also want to reiterate how much I love the friendship/relationship between Edward and Bella. Even though he only appeared at the beginning of the chapter, that scene between him and Bella stayed with me throughout.
Jessica, as always, was fantastic. The relationships you've created with not only the main characters but the supporting as well has truly given substance to an already unique storyline. I really feel for all the characters, ranging from Emmett to Bella. The best thing a writer can ever do is make a reader connect with his/her characters and you've done that wonderfully. I very much look forward to reading more of them!
| Capricorn75 chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
Oh, I love your Rosalie, and their girl time this chapter. Don't trust Tom at all, and I'm afraid that Bella may have overlooked something he found. Or maybe he planted something.
| 2muchtrouble chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
| songster chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
I love the by-play between Bella and Jessica and Bella and Rosalie. It's one of the few times that I've enjoyed either secondary character. I've never been a fan of Rosalie from source material and fic seems determined to make me hate her. LOL. It's refreshing to find a Rosalie that isn't the Amazonian bitch with the secret heart of 'protect my family' gold.
| whohellanoes chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
i have nothing interesting to say...just that i like reading this story. thanks so much.
| TessLouise chapter 7 . 10/28/2012