Reviews for Beneath this Sky
mugglemom08 chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
So. Carlisle, Jasper, Emmett, and Rosalie are vamps. Edward's human. Esme and Alice are no-shows so far. Bella knows about vampires, but they don't know she knows. Or, at least, she doesn't know that they know she knows. And they're all (except maybe the no-shows) are all working to figure out the whole time-traveling thing? And cure the effects? NGL, I'd love to see one-eyed Emmett in a tutu. :-)
Ness1956 chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
Awesome chapter!
mugglemom08 chapter 2 . 10/28/2012
"Fine, have it your way. You really should phase into a mule instead of a wolf, you know. Stubborn ass."

- I totally read that in Reese Witherspoon's voice.
Guest chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
great story
mugglemom08 chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
I don't know how in the world I missed this when I have you on author alert, but I did. Not a clue as to what's going on, but I'm looking forward to finding out.
sassy991 chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
Truly enjoyed this chapter. There were so many varying components to this update, it was like savoring a dish with different, wonderful bursts of flavor. Well done!
I've rarely said this about Rosalie in fanfics, but I absolutely adore her. You've really expanded on the vulnerability that lies within Rosalie, which was briefly done in the books but overshadowed by her cold, mean demeanor. You've made her your own character, one with real emotions and struggles, and it's absolutely beautiful to see her open up. The bonding her and Bella did at the end of the chapter, sharing the burden of their respective demons, shed new light on both characters and gave us a few answers. Now with an understanding of Bella's past, I'm curious as to see why Rose keeps Emmet at an arm's length. Could it have to do with the man who hurt her, whom she eventually killed? I look forward to finding out.
I also want to reiterate how much I love the friendship/relationship between Edward and Bella. Even though he only appeared at the beginning of the chapter, that scene between him and Bella stayed with me throughout.
Jessica, as always, was fantastic. The relationships you've created with not only the main characters but the supporting as well has truly given substance to an already unique storyline. I really feel for all the characters, ranging from Emmett to Bella. The best thing a writer can ever do is make a reader connect with his/her characters and you've done that wonderfully. I very much look forward to reading more of them!
Capricorn75 chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
Oh, I love your Rosalie, and their girl time this chapter. Don't trust Tom at all, and I'm afraid that Bella may have overlooked something he found. Or maybe he planted something.
2muchtrouble chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
songster chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
I love the by-play between Bella and Jessica and Bella and Rosalie. It's one of the few times that I've enjoyed either secondary character. I've never been a fan of Rosalie from source material and fic seems determined to make me hate her. LOL. It's refreshing to find a Rosalie that isn't the Amazonian bitch with the secret heart of 'protect my family' gold.
whohellanoes chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
i have nothing interesting to say...just that i like reading this story. thanks so much.
TessLouise chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
So good!
blueXsun chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
Gah! I love this so much! Tom has me a little suspicious... I'm gonna have to keep my eye on him :) I love how all the relationships are developing. Tucking Edward in and sharing with Rosalie. The embry story makes me sad :(

Thanks for writing! xoxo
FenixMJR chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
Should we worry about Tom? I really liked Jessica, Bella and Rosalie sleepover.
blueeyes11354 chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
Amazing now sometimes people can change so drastically - from sweet little boy to crazy Raider. Everybody comes from somewhere I guess.
evilnat chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
Excellent. I liked the little bit of insight into rosalie. And I noticed that Edward doesn't seem to have a clue she's a vampire (I don't think anyway)

Great chapter, Jessica and bellas chemistry is great.

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