|Reviews for Beneath this Sky|
| evilnat chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Beautiful. Really it was. I can't wait to hit the next button.
| FenixMJR chapter 3 . 8/23/2012
Jessica is refreshing in your story I like that, Bella is awesome and endearing
| FenixMJR chapter 2 . 8/23/2012
And now I want to know even more, I’m seriously loving your plot
| FenixMJR chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Damn….can’t wait for more, what happened? Oh got the rec for your story here ;) 2012/08/20/fic-rec-beneath-this-sky-by-bedelia/#comment-320
| AbstractSong101 chapter 3 . 8/22/2012
Reviewing as i read :)
Tattooed initials intrigue me particularly, but im sure all his tattoos mean something!
"he smiled like he'd invented it, like he was the first person in the history of the world to discover the contagious nature of grins." Love this. It made me grin!
"Stranger or no, vampire or no, Bella could have kissed him." Dont blame her! In all seriousness tho, i am glad Carlisle is a good guy. Phew.
I like Jessica, she seems like a good person, and I like that whatever this syndrome is (I totally googled it last chapter btw, just incase haha) isnt stopping her from being confident.
I think Jake is going to be pissed when he finds out what Bella did!
The description of the trailer is brilliant, i can really *see* it.
"God, do you think I have a vampire fetish?" I lol'd
Ok seriously. I think Im in love with Jessica.
Urgh, Ive worked with people like Tom before. Poor Bella.
'"Would you like some help? I know it's a bit soon for couple's therapy, since we just met yesterday, but..."
He trailed off with another one of his lopsided smiles.'
Loved that :D Cute Edward is cute.
Hey wow, look at my lack of questions!
Brilliant update, i can go and read the ADF teaser now too, i avoided it cos I hadnt read this yet!
Cant wait for the next chapter, thank you :)
| Nicoconsd chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Yay, looking forward to jumping in :)
| CommaQueen2 chapter 3 . 8/20/2012
This is such an intriguing story! I can't wait to see what exactly this world is about and where you take us.
| StellaBlueBella chapter 3 . 8/20/2012
Loving your Edward so far. Trying to figure what's up her and Jake. Your little twists on cannon are so funny. Glad you cleared that up about Mary, I was thinking she was Alice. But now you've me wondering about some of the guys names I don't immediately recognize are they obscure references too?
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/20/2012
| Genny910 chapter 3 . 8/20/2012
This is going to be a great story. So mysterious, so many questions! Nice job.
| StellaBlueBella chapter 2 . 8/19/2012
So much going on here but I have the feeling I'll be able to make sense of it soon enough. Fascinating.
| StellaBlueBella chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Wow what is going on here... So compelling though.
| samrosey chapter 3 . 8/19/2012
I've never read another fic anywhere near this before, I love the concept and I love that it didn't start with, "Well, all those years ago, a Surge happened and this is how..." The little teases of information spread out across these first few chapters is perfect for my curiosity and need or not need to know certain information.
Ah, can I have one of Edward's cupcakes? :)
| samrosey chapter 2 . 8/19/2012
The lightning, the Raiders, Charlie!
I have so many questions and I'm excited for how the answers will reveal themselves!
| samrosey chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
"I destroyed the world for you."
How can I not be in?!
I'm so intrigued already...