|Reviews for Fang and Fox|
| zolydck chapter 16 . 3/9
The anbu bit was hilarious, getting revenge on naruto by making him learn math
| Blinded in a bolthole chapter 1 . 2/28
A bit irresponsible, giving Sake to a kid. Sure, "old enough to kill, old enough to drink!" and all that, but this logic is like "Broken your arm? Break your fingers too."
| Water-Soter chapter 18 . 2/27
Wow, what an amazing story. I have to admit I was a little tentative to read it but now I'm glad I did. I do have one question though, well, I'm a bit confused as to why we're reading about the Wave mission since it has nothing to do either directly or indirectly with Team 8s progression or story as a whole? I just don't get it. Of course that's just my opinion but it seems like it doesn't belong in this story though I have to say I love your Shino, he's fantastic. But yeah, I just don't get it. Great story and I am so dying for an update!
| Gaiseric chapter 18 . 2/26
Very nice to see a new chapter, very well done, and glad to see some offset with the inclusion of getting some time with Team 7 as well as the focus of Team 8. I also like the fact that Hiashi puts himself forward as somewhat non-committal and cold, but at the same time there's hidden subtext to what he's saying and doing. Nice work there.
Look forward to more as it happens.
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 18 . 2/26
Kakashi is such a troll. Trollkashi... and Shino as well for Trollno. I can just see both of them following Sasuke and Sakura for the entire date and recording it. Now, will they have to keep Ino from sabotouging it? I can't wait to see what happens to Naruto after a week of training with Gai and Hana. Plus what Kurenai has planned for Hinata besides meeting Anko.
On the Inuzuka elder who spoke out against Naruto... I almost hope he acts up so Hana can make good on her threat. Just have his canine know better and run for the hills to avoid sharing his fate.
| Freefan1412 chapter 18 . 2/26
I want to do some cackling. Naruto settled with Gai for a week. Naruto and Kiba forced to study from books. Bet between Team seven; I don't think there is quite anything that could motivate Sakura more than this one thing. Sasuke is in for a hell of a surprise. I'm betting on Sakura. xd
Great chapter. :) I'm looking forward to more.
| SoraHuuzuke chapter 18 . 2/26
It took me awhile to get into this story but as it continued and I got farther into it I found it to be a very good story and like the changes you have made to the story line. I look forward to seeing how you continue the story.
| falcoknights chapter 18 . 2/23
Nice way of doing the ch
| PhantomX0990 chapter 18 . 2/23
| falcoknights chapter 15 . 2/23
Nice ch keep up the good work
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| Lameth35 chapter 18 . 2/23
And here I thought there were no good surprises left in Naruto fanfiction, but your characterizations of Team 8 are refreshing- I like what you're doing with Naruto and Kurenai, and what you're doing with Kiba is awesome. The way you're working all 4 of them into a team is impressive. Actually more so since the chunin exams aren't even here yet(yeah, they're coming on the horizon but you still have lots of time for story and character/team building. I'm looking forward to seeing what you'll do with Hinata too. It's gonna be her time to shine a bit and a week one on one with Kurenai (and Ino in the background but not to be forgotten) for support? Should be good. In your story this may be her first team but whether it's canon or fanfics she's never struck me as someone low on tactics or strategy. That's another neat thing about this story- it's not just the genin who are growing, she is, too. You have something special here so don't let the writer's block win! Take your time, and the story WILL come. Also kudos to Phantom, too!
| falcoknights chapter 12 . 2/22
Aww poor Hinata
| falcoknights chapter 11 . 2/22